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I have to do a video about my life in english.. And I'm going to do like "draw my life". Can someone correct the text please?
While I was in the belly of my mother , she and my father thought of the name I would have. There were two options. My mother liked Erika and my father liked Miriam . After much discussion , my father won!
And this is me! My name is Miriam and I was born on March 1, 1989 In a small town near Madrid, Spain
When I was young I was very shy and my mother promised me that if I approached to meet new girls I have a surprise. There was never a surprise but that helped me overcome my shyness .
My first day of school I cried a lot but then I made a lot of friends.
When I was 7, my uncle, who was a handball coach , asked me to start practicing this sport. And I said yes ! I played for seven years and was one of the best experiences of my life for what I learned.
When I finished school, I decided to study law to get the bad guys in jail. But I also wanted to earn my own money so I decided to work with children as a tutor.
My first day I was nervous but I was happy because I knew that the children were learning with me.
I am now tutor of 7 children. But this story is better than what I tell you it
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I can't stand or I won't stand?
What is the better way? I think I won't stand is used in USA and I can't stand in England but I don't know if it's correct what I think... Someone can I help me?
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Dear Host Family:
Dear host family:
My name is Miriam, I’m 25 years old and I’m from Valladolid, a little city close to Madrid, in Spain. I live with my dad, Jose Luis and my mum, Maria del Mar. We’re a close family and though we all are busy, we try to spend time together, having dinner, watching a movie, taking a walk around the city… We love order delivery too!
My parents have a jewelry store. My mum is responsible for serving customers and my dad is responsible for accounting. They make a good team! They have been married for 30 years but they love as the first day!
Another very important part in my life is my grandparents. I spent a lot of time with them when I was young because my parents worked and they looked me out. Now, I only have my grandmother and I love spend time with her! She taught to knit and now I can make scarfs, gloves and wool hats for winter.
In high school, I played handball for 7 years and I learnt many things: fight, friendship, perseverance, discipline, responsibility… I was lucky to play with the best players in Spain and we won a European championship! My coach said a phrase I have ever used in my life: “there are people waiting for something to happen, others dream something happens and you work for that something”. I miss playing a team sport, so long as I can play with my friends to basketball, tennis or beach sports in summer…
After I finished high school, I went to college and I studied law. I always wanted to be a lawyer to defend the rights of others. I finished my career with a good final grade. It was very difficult because I was studying for 8-10 hours a day but I learned that with hard work anything is possible!
While I was in college, I decided to find out what It was earning my own money and started tutoring. I have five years by tutoring. My tasks are to help children with homework, how to study, prepare their exams and teach them to speak right words. I also teach French. Now, I have four children: Felix, 12, Judith, 7, Andrea, 10 and Jorge 15 years. Jorge is a very special child because he has ADHD, He is a child with lots of energy but with a smile and a little patience we managed this year to approve all subjects. For some of them I’m like an older sister, they tell me what they have done at school, their friends and the older they talk about boys and girls they like. I love listen to them and advise them on what to do.
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My experience in Texas.
I want to tell my experience in Texas. I have visited Texas two months ago and This trip has been the best trip in my life. I met an american girl in Spain and she invited to me to Texas. It was amazing! At first, I was scared because I travelled alone on plane for first time.
I have been in Houston, Austin and Dallas. My favourite city there is Austin because the buildings were very huge! but actually, I think If I visit NY, the buildings will be bigger.
Also, I have visited Las Vegas, but I haven't a good memory about this trip because someone steals my camera, but the party is very nice!
I wish I come back to Texas soon.
Thank you!
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