How should I revise the sentence? "It is realistic that the amount of funding be adjusted corresponding to the financial status of local governments." Does the sentence looks nice and proper in an academic essay?

Do you think the sentence is natural or correct? "Traditional art is worth goverments allocating funding to support them." I want to express that "traditional art deserves goverments' funding."

What do you think of the sentence in terms of grammar? "Had it not been for nuclear energy research, many countries could have been in energy crisis now." And what about the following sentence? "Had it not been for nuclear energy research, many countries could be in energy crisis now."

Do you think the sentence is correct? The life expentancy in Canada and Japan were around 77. Is "The life expentancy" compatible with "were"?

Which one do you think is correct? Mary has written as many essays as her brother. VS Mary has written as many essays as her brother has done. VS Mary has written as many essays as her brother does.

Do you think it's correct? The centence was written for IELTS Writing Task 1. "The diagram shows the process on how used bottles are recycled from residence zones to plants to markets." Do you think "the process on how ..." is correct?

Do you think it's right or not? Thank you for your help! In the sentence of "There's a personal growth award for students who have overcome an obstacle." 1. Should "an obstacle" be modified as "obstackles" corresponding to "students"? 2. Is there a contradiction between "a personal growth award" and " for students"?

Which one is correct? Thank you for your concern. Which one is correct? "As the last resort, you can take your case to court" VS "As a last resort, you can take your case to court"

Is there anything wrong with the sentence? Thank you for your concern. "The right of decision-making is left to the consumers." I don't know if it's correct to use "is" for the "right".