Can u help me to check out my composition?  I am a beginer in learning English.  and i   think there are a lot of mistakes in   my compositions . but i dont know  where are they  and how to express  right.  So can  u  help me ?

SHOPPING Today is a shopping day . Today is sunday, My friend Mengsi Zhang , a girl who is 24 years old ,want to shopping . Summer is passed and Autom is coming . We want to buy some clothes. Actally, another reason,she want to have a boyfriend,and fall inlove with a boy . haha . We want to dress up ourselves . Girls are all like shopping. I had work in clothing company 6 years And most of time I work in big malls ,teaching sales how to pick clothes and match them for clients. We pricticed classified their figures and charcaters into different sorts, and require sales do the right thing to achieve their targets . I know how to make a woman looks more beauty at first sight when I see them , I really good at choosing right clothes for a girl. At last she bought two coats, a dress and a T shirt. The term "SALE " looks like "free" when girl is shopping. haha .So come on girls.Let's work hard , earn much money , fight for a new mak—up or new dresses.

STAR TREK Today I go out with a friend. We see the movie "STAR TREK 3 —BEYOND THE STARS". It's a seris of moives .It's very famous .The first STAR TREK showed in 20years ago. Young people in China all like it ,especially who really obessed with Astronomy. My friends and I are all big fans . This movie looks amazing . The picture of the space station ,the tecnongly and the spaceship ,the beautiful universe , It make me think about the future of humans, how's the human's life thousands years later? It will come ture really?

MY LAST JOB I quited my job last week. Acactally I had work 5 years in clothing brands company in Chinese, they are not brands from other country, it dont need English at all.so I didnt learn English past 5 years. I worked 2 years in last job. I worked in Marking department at last job. The brand is a new brand for young girls about 18 to 30 years old . It's designed by our young boss,a girl named Fiona Chen, She has her own style , like use the colour of saturation is high and she like color collision .also she like to put kinds of stract paintings on clothings . The brand named by her name fiona chen. And it's very fashion and special, looks like MOSCHINO. The brand FIONA CHEN had only one store in Galeries Lafayette in BEIJING when I started work in the brand in 2014. so the most thing I did in this company was opened stores in different citys of China . I had go to Harerbin /Changchun(in North of China) / Nan chang/ Wuhan an so on. It is no exaggeration to say that I had been go to most of Chinese citys. The work open a clothing store is not easy. It's tired and complicated . ONE , I had to interview some sales who 's familiar with saleing clothing and our boss hoped the sales looks fashion and beautiful. TWO , I had to supervise the store decoration,ensure they can finish in right time. Three, I had to communicate with the supervisors of the MALL. Four , I had to do trains for new sales.It's about sale skills 、brand style 、 product knowledge in this season and how to serve for clients .Make sure they can sale clothes and get a good achievements. anyway ,Its not easy and I aways busy in past 2 years. I even didnt have time to go out and have a dinner with my friends ,even more watch new film in a movie theatre or read a book. I am happy after quit job,and i will find another job .