könnte jemand bitte meinen Satz korriegieren? Mit grossem Interesse habe ich Ihre Anzeige gelesen und möchte mich Ihnen als Buchhalterin vorstellen. Da ich in XX und YY lebe, weiss ich, dass AA ein führender Anbieter von Hotellerie und Gastronomieangeboten auf dem Platz BB ist, und ich würde gern Teil Ihrer dynamischen und professionellen Arbeitsumwelt sein wollen.

Holidays with grandparents!! Hallo everyboy, this is my first written. I would be very thankful if someone would be so kind to correct my mistakes!! "Yesterday I brought my children to my parents. It's my first time, that I spend such a long time without my children!!! They always have in October fifteen days of school holidays and now that they are more grow, we have tought, they would have been able to spend some time together their grandparents without us parents. The journey by train was a little tiring because we had to change more than on train. The children were excited and they have been very happy to see their grandparents. I believe they will have a good experience, which they will always able to keep in their hearts!!!!"