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While reading Harry Potter, I noticed that Hogwarts doesn't have it's own school paper. A lot of different interesting stories happened at Hogwarts. Also a unique personalities worked and studied there. However there was no school paper, that could be told about it.
Of course, there were other newspapers in the world of Harry Potter, such as the Quibler or the Daily Prophet, but I don't think they are good enough. The school newspaper is a good source of information for students and their parents. I think the school paper must be have in Hogwarts.
If Hogwarts had it's own school paper, what would it be called? Who would was it's editor? What were would the articles was about? Who was would interviewed?
Let's imagine. The 'Hognews' is a weekly Hogwarts newspaper. It is the first and foremost a magical school newspaper for students and their parents.
I want to write about it and I will please you if you correct my mistakes.
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When I travel I enjoy eating out. Once upon a time I came to Krasnoyarsk. At the time I wanted to be in an original place. I decided to visit Witcher Bar. My friends told me about this place. They suggested me visiting this bar because it was a very strange but authentic place. I remembered my friend's advice and headed toward the Witcher Bar. The bar comprised two mid-size, dimly-lit, and fairly clean room that smelled beer and snacks. There wasn't window because the Witcher situated on basement. If you played "Witcher" in PC you would understand how this bar was looked. It was look like a real bar from the Witcher. Shields, swords and magic signs hung on the walls. The rooms was lit with the stubs of candles sitting on rough wooden tables. The floor seemed at first glance to be true stone. It was a very atmospheric place. Everything is as I love it.
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Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit.
Wisdom is not putting in a fruit salad.
Miles Kington
I think this quote is very good because knowledge don't wisdom. If a person knows much it doesn't mean that the person is wise. Moreover experience gives birth to wisdom. Once upon a time the Greeks said we suffer our way to wisdom. Meanwhile knowledge easier to get. So stay wise and clever at once.
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Hello! Could you correct my letter, please?
This is a made-up letter to Professor Severus Snape. Severus Snape is a character in Harry Potter Books.
Date: 31.07.1994
Subject: Invitation to a Potions seminar "The innovation Potions"
Dear Severus Snape,
You are cordially invited to participate in the upcoming a seminar that we are confident will interest you. The Potions Seminar will hold at the Saint-Petersburg Winter Palace on 16 August. The aims of the seminar are to bring together researches and practitioners in an effort to lay the ground for future collaborative research in potions. The seminar welcomes magic presentations from any interested participant willing to present potion during the meeting.
We believe it to be a wonderful opportunity for you to learn more about new potions, establish strong magic relations and have a good time.
We are enclosing 2 tickets for you. We hope that you decide to attend. We are available for yours questions at any time. We look forward to seeing you there.
Yours sincerely
Igor Romanov,
Headmaster Koldovstoretz
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Hello!
Could you correct my mistakes, please?
Harry Potter and the Weasley family.
If you read a book in the original language, you see history in a new light. So it happened to me with the book about Harry Potter. When I was reading the fourth book about Harry Potter, the moment when the Weasley family came to support Harry Potter before the third task of The Triwizard Tournament seemed to me a touching moment. I’ve really impressed with this surprise. In my view that was a very decent act they did.
I think the whole of the Weasley family loved Harry. He was like a family member to them. Harry was an orphan but he made himself at home with the Weasleys. The Weasleys were Harry’s favorite family in the world. It's a real stroke of luck that Harry made friends with Ron and then the whole of Weasley family.
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Bu içerik Topluluk Kurallarını ihlal ediyor.20 Mart 2021
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Could you correct my mistakes please?
Neville's thoughts.
There was a dead silence in the boys' dormitory. Neville couldn't fall asleep. The news about The Triwizard Tournament was bothering him. He walked up to the window to takes his mind off the thoughts. His eyes rested upon the dark Forbidden Forest. Neville paralyzed with fright when he reflected on the Tournament. On the one hand his participation in the tournament was a great chance of upholding the family honor. On the other hand it was a real stroke of luck that only students who are of age will be allowed of participating.
“What happened?” asked Harry putting glasses on.
"Nothing..." Neville said in an undertone . He felt how he was losing his nerve but said nothing more. The question was made him come back to his four-poster bed. He fell asleep before the sun really rises.
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In the magical world young whiches and wizards look forward to the letters from Hogwarts every year. We know that the Hogwarts' students get to school by Hogwarts Express, but we don't know how the Hogwarts' teachers get to the castle. We can only assume about it. It's so interesting to keep with how the professors reach Hogwarts. There are several ways to travel in the magical world: train, Broomstick, magical creatures, portals, floo powder, apparition, carriage. The hogwarts professors can arrive at school in different ways. For example, some can arrive on brooms but this method is difficulty of transporting a trunk. However, the apparition is a wrong way because Hogwarts lands were always protected by anti-apparation charms. Meanwhilen the portals are difficult and unsafe way as well as floo powder or magical creatures. If Hogwarts professors got to the castle by carriage they would waste a lot of time. I think all of the Hogwarts professors get to the castle by train but early than Hogwarts students. What do you think about it? In the third Harry Potter book professor Lupin got to Hogwarts by train with students. There were a reason for it. I think he missed train that other professors got to Hogwarts because he was in a werewolf's form. Are you agree with me?
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Harry Potter. The film actor vs the book character.
I want to describe one of Harry Potter books' character. This is Uncle Vernon. Uncle Vernon Dursley was Aunt Petunia's husband. He was a large, beefy man with little neck and a lot of mustache. He didn't like Harry Potter and hated magic. He had a big fists and he could use them against Harry when he was angry. Uncle Vernon had often bullied Harry because he had thought that Harry was abnormal. Harry Potter's untidy hair had always been a source of great annoyance to Uncle Vernon. When I was comparing to film actor on the book character, I thought Uncle Vernon in the film looked like Uncle Vernon in the book. Richard Griffiths played Uncle Vernon very good.
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Harry Potter's gifts
When Harry Potter was thirteen years old his friends gived him the wonderful gifts for his birthday. Ron made the Pocket Sneakoscope. It was a useful thing which help to detect someone untrustworthy. Hermione presented Broomstick Servicing Kit to Harry. There was a lot of things to care for the broomstick in the kit. The Monster Book of Monsters was gived by Hagrid. It was the strange magic book which Harry could use on the lessons in Hogwarts. I think, Hermione's gift was the best for Harry because Harry loved to fly on a broomstick. If I could give a present to Harry Potter I would give him magic glasses that don't brake. I think this glasses would was useful to him.
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