课文一。The small text in Chinese . 我是圣彼得堡人。 我的城市很美丽。 这城市很大，但是圣彼得堡比莫斯科小。 我们天气很糟糕：与，风强大，温度冷。 我喜欢圣彼得堡的博物馆。 我最爱动工博物馆。 这是最大的。 我喜欢亨利马蒂斯的绘画 “跳舞”。 这是很大 和华美。这是五个人。 这人不白色的，这是红色的。 稂是绿色的，天是蓝色的。 我喜欢学习汉语。 中文太难， 但是魅力。 我的教科书要三十个单位。 这是难以。 I have been studying Chinese for 3 months, this is my first text. Thank you in advance for correcting it!

Describing a photo his photo was made in the cinema. We can see 2 rows of people sitting in the darkness. There is a big lighter behind them. In the centre of the photo there is a girl looking in her mobile phone. She looks as if she has seen a bad news. I think she feels devastating and isn’t interested in the movie at all. I suppose she is thinking what to answer on her message. To her right we can see a man eating a pop-corn. I suppose both of them are know each other. He tries to read the message on the girl’s mobile phone but it is difficult to do this in the darkness. I assume he doesn’t like the message too but he hasn’t realized the dismay of the message yet. The man on the right side of the picture looks on the phone with big interest, I think he is neutral. In the background we see people who are watching the film and really enjoy it. They haven’t got any problems as people on the foreground.

What adventure I want to take. It’s very interesting to travel around the world. Some people like quite vacations with lying on the beach, sunbathing, drinking coctails, taking a massage, so do I. But it’s not the only type of vacation I prefer. Sometimes I want to take a ticket to the country lying in the mountains and go trekking. There are many interesting routes in Himalayas. One of the Himalayan country is Nepal. It is unique country with 40% of it’s area located on the high above 3000 metres. The Everest which is the highest mountain on planet is located there. If you find the group of tourists with the same interests, you can meet in Kolkata, the capital on Nepal, and then can go to on your route. The good thing for such journey that you couldn’t take tent, sleeping bag and the other stuff with you. Everything you need in the evening you can find in the camp so you couldn’t walk long paths with heavy backpack. You just carry the most required things like toothbrush, undewear, camera, etc. While you are walking you just looking around to amazing scenic: high mountains with snow hats, blue lakes, green forests and fields. The beautiful untouched wild nature is around you and all you need is breath fresh air and catch the moment. Thank you for your corrections))

Could you help me to improve my pronunciation in English

hello to everybody!

My name is Alexandra, I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia. Right now I'm working on my prononciation in English. 

I would lke to ask you for your assistance. Could you check whether I pronounce all the sounds correctly and give me WRITTEN recommendations on how to improve my pronunciation. My short (30 sec) audio is on the voicespice.com.

https://voicespice.com/Player.aspx?c=p&h=69771C63&j=3E6B4#.WH_Qr9SLSt9 

I could analyze your advices and practice them. 

Thank you a lot!