Could you check and correct my English? I have finished reading La Dame aux camellias. It was written by Alexandre Dumas Fils in 1848. This is a story which I had wanted to read for a long time. I think it is so tragic but so beautiful. I'm going to read it again. Thank you.

Could you check and correct my English? I like English, but I'm not good at it. Recently, I realized English is very very important for me to work, to communicate, for business. I become so nervous and my mind go blank when I talk in English. I always worry about I may not be able to hear and to understand what people say, I may not be able to explain what I want to tell. But, I won't give up. My goal is to become fluent English speaker within two and a half years. I'll do my best to acquire English. Thank you ✨!

Could you check and correct my English? I met junior high school friends for the first time in a while. We haven't met each other since our coming of age ceremony. Everyone looks fine! We talked about each university life, each company which we will work in, and so on. We talked about ex-lover too! lol We had a good time. I want to meet them again in near the future! Thank you [emoji]✨

Today's incident I've been to shopping. I bought a flat shoes and a dress for graduation party . After I got to my house, I watched comedy on TV. Today was good day. Thank you.