Could someone correct my sentences so it looks more native ? Some educationalist think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. Many schools and universities offer their students to study in other place temporarily. There are advantages and disadvantages of such visits. Studying abroad allow you get to know many new people unless you are very shy or introverted. Lifelong friendships are made during travelling when your main focus is on sightseeing and visiting new places. While you are studying abroad you need to work in groups so the chances you meet your soulmate rise. Travelling people are exposed to other cultures, in addition, if you made some new friends and you are invited to family parties you may get to know new customs and spot cultural differences. Unfortunately, there are also disadvantages. Universities may not be very demanding for foreign students knowing that for some of them it was the only chance to see the world from different perspective and they want to see places in their free time rather than study hard. Furthermore, some student get used to party life and it is very hard for them to get back on track when they are back in their country. Carefully planned exchange visits may only benefit students, such programs usually last 6 months and that isn’t very long.

Could you correct my essay (words, phrasal verbs) so it looks as if native speaker wrote it ? Some educationalist think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at school. Many schools and universities offer their students to study in other place temporarily. There are advantages and disadvantages of such visits. Studying abroad allow you get to know many new people unless you are very shy or introverted. Lifelong friendships are made during travelling when your main focus is on sightseeing and visiting new places. While you are studying abroad you need to work in groups so the chances you meet your soulmate rise. Travelling people are exposed to other cultures, in addition, if you made some new friends and you are invited to family parties you may get to know new customs and spot cultural differences. Unfortunately, there are also disadvantages. Universities may not be very demanding for foreign students knowing that for some of them it was the only chance to see the world from different perspective and they want to see places in their free time rather than study hard. Furthermore, some student get used to party life and it is very hard for them to get back on track when they are back in their country. Carefully planned exchange visits may only benefit students, such programs usually last 6 months and that isn’t very long.

A few sentences to check - Leading Pilot Project - first person to take over Supply Planning and Data Analysis responsibilities in the new team - Fast understanding of the system allowed getting to know and handing off another category - Providing manager with correct date and proposing accurate solutions have built a reliable relationship - Through helping described as a very helpful and reliable person by other colleagues - POWER BI – Utilized PowerBi to create various analytical dashboards which have been used by Category Owner. Conducted a training from PowerBi and working on an instruction on basic tools.

A few sentences to check - Leading Pilot Project - first person to take over Supply Planning and Data Analysis responsibilities in the new team - Fast understanding of the system allowed getting to know and handing off another category - Providing manager with correct date and proposing accurate solutions have built a reliable relationship - Through helping described as a very helpful and reliable person by other colleagues - POWER BI – Utilized PowerBi to create various analytical dashboards which have been used by Category Owner. Conducted a training from PowerBi and working on an instruction on basic tools.

Hi, Could you check my short story ? It is going to be a description of a series’s episode.In the previous episode Rachel dated a criminal. Although she didn’t know a lot about him her ex husband had told her that he might be involved in the robbery. Finally she dated that guy and told him to look underneath a table. After he lowered his head under the table he saw a gun pointing at him. What happened next is the professor was told to take the police woman home and show her what is inside. Fortunately the professor was prepared for that and had taken out all stuff that might have looked suspicious. It has not been mentioned that he operated the whole operation from his property. Finally she belived the professor was innocent and they slept together. When there were having good time a riot rose inside the bank. Some hostages escaped and the police were about to go in. Gangsters inside the building found out they are in danger. Eventually the policewomen got a phone from a hospital that her ex husband had just had an accident and is in an intensive care and he is in coma.

A book review to check A book is about a group of 5 people whose goal is to kill a very dangerous person responsible for deaths of many people. He lives in hidden place somewhere in Serbia. The main characters tackle with many obstacles. They are afraid of being exposed and when that happens they are being chased and person after person dies until only the main character is alive. and the whole mission relies on him. He managed to reach the killer in his mansion and killed him after pretty long discussion. Darko (killer's name) revealed that the whole mission had been planned and the goal was to leave only one person alive. After the mission the main character retires and moves to a small town in England where he does leisure activities and goes on dates. He also has to attend meetings with psychologist. Unfortunately there is a problem with his neighbours which party all the time and leave litter in his driveaway. He asked them not come so close his property but it didn't help. It even made the whole situation worse, the group of people though that he had tried to threat them and showing their power they broke in his house. It was enough for the officer and one day when there was a party, they usually hanged out in the middle of an iced lake, he shot at ice and made a big whole in a lake. Some of the people sank but from this point he was never intruded again.

How native would write this description ? If you would like to visit lovely places near the center of the city I have some recommendations for you. I will give you some suggestions and also add information how far these places are from the center of the city. If you like looking at a town from high buildings I strongly recommend visiting the biggest building. You can also find there a restaurant and eat the most popular food that are common for this part of the country. This building is in the centre of the city. If you have a little more time you can take a bus XXX and go to a lake. Photo of this lake is attached below. Go there with your friends and take sausages. If weather is good there is a tremendous chance you will light a fireplace up and roast sasuages. Remember not to be behave loudly because people come here for fishing. Let me give you some suggestions what to do in the winter. From November there is the ice for free and it is great fun ! Unfortunately there are no mountains near this city unless you want to go on a longer trip. There are many mountainous places and it takes 1 or 1.5 hour to get there. Condition to skiing is not as good as in Italy or France but you can still have a lot of fun !

Can I use it this way ? Hi, Does this sentence make sense ? "I find having highly-developed English very important skill "