where is your paradise?

how i wish my english compositions can be corrected!

What can we do for Low-Carbon Economy?

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IF there is only one day for you ,what do you want to do ?

please help me correct this composition!thanks so much!! Lectures were used in the past as a good way of teaching a large number of students. As new technology is now available for education, some people suggest that there is no justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Agree/ Disagree型 1、Since Socrates’ days, we human beings have been using lectures as an irreplaceably important way of teaching. However, advanced technology changement is a truth we have believed. Still, if more aspects are taken into consideration, it is understandable why lectures are irreplaceable. Technology, especially breakthroughs and innovation of Internet, make it possible for students to study by themselves at home rather than just sitting in the classroom, waiting for the lecture to tell what he or she wants to find out about certain subject. However, all the benefits bring along by technology does not necessarily imply the disposal of lecture method. Instead, lectures have their own emotionally appeals to students. Only found in real lectures rather than any other high-tech teaching method, the beauty of sound delivered by the lecturer still attracts a great deal of students, especially for student major in literature. By listening to the lecture who read those words for us can we feel the beauty of languages. A good lecturer, being good at not only speech skill but abundant knowledge, inspires students’ passion for the subject. Last but not least, all the emotional contact, no matter with lecturers or peer students, gives listener a unique psychological experience that technology can never achieve. In conclusion, educating people is such a complex mission that need all sorts of method to complete, thus we cannot say that there is no justification for lecture any more just because advanced technology make education easier. It is better to make good use of both traditional lecture and cutting-edge technology in the same time in education practice. 2、I cannot totally agree. New technology just a tool ,not the main way of education! Education needs communication,people attain knowledge by voice,picture,words,listening,writing,reading,ect.all this just can be done by humanbeings. Well, somepeople may say technology can made voice,but the voice just like the humanbeings’…………. As there is lecture , there has school,students,teachers,headmasters,ect,all these people make up a little society ,and make the real society more motavitional,we can’t imaging that there will no students in the street,all yongs staying at home ,no communication,no disscusion,no face to face .just using the new technology,we can’t make real friends . all peolple live in a big family ,not alone, we need talking, new technology only makes all this easier,but cannot replace that,and never ,unless the society were made up by other things,not the beings.because no matter in wherever ,if needs people to be the controller,people needs face to face communication -------just because we do things by brain and emotion.

if some one can amend this composition,that's very nice! recently, i read some books ,and have a new feeling about life:always, we care more about money and faceble stuffs,however, life is just a feeling from your heart,don't compare yourselr with others ,just to be yourself,the unfareness always comes from compareness,so,live on today,and try your best to find the happy things in your life ,find other people's advantages,then make it yours! so please enjoy your life,not live your life!

“励志”用英语怎么说？

修改作文该用“amend”"mend"还是其他的词？谢谢！