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Big sporting events such as Olympic or World-cup need hosting country. However, to hold big sporting events have advantages and disadvantages for hosting country. Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others said that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. I agree with the opinion to hold sporting events in own country.
First, I would like to talk about the benefits of holding big sporting events. First of all, hosting country teach people who live in other countries. The event broadcast worldwide. Many countries’ people can have an opportunity to watch. Also, they can have an opportunity to know the hosting country. Second of all, the hosting country can get many visitors who came to the hosting country to see the sporting event. The visitors spend money in the country. It leads to increase economy in the country.
Second, I would like talk about problems to hold a sporting event in own country. First of all, the hosting country spends big money before holding the sporting event. To hold big sporting events, need many things such as stadiums. If the country does not have stadiums to do sport enough, they have to make a stadium for the event. Second of all, they have to protect from terrorism. Presidents in each country will come to the hosting country. Also, many people visit the country. Terrorists might target the country to happen terrorism.
Overall, I agree with the opinion to hold a big sporting event in own country. To hold a sporting event, there are some risks as I said. However, those problems can solve. The first problem is to make new stadiums for the event. If the hosting county makes new stadiums, the new stadium will be a legacy in the country. Visitors might come to the country to see the stadium after the event. The second problem is terrorism. We can solve the problem to do immigration strictly. It is because terrorists cannot enter the country. In conclusion, I agree to hold bog sporting event in own country.
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There are two opinions about money. The first one is that it is necessary to spend large sums money of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.
Other one is that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
The first opinion is good idea to improve city economics and transportation for city and people. If there were very first trains between cities, people who live in those cities could be easier go to both cities for them purpose as shopping, to work or to travel etc. In this case, those cities' economics would be improved because they spend money each city. However, it spends a lot of money.
The second opinion is good idea to improve transportation for people. Improving existing transport could be increase diagrams of train.
It would be comfortable life for people who is living the city. However, it does not involve other cities
Overall, I agree the first opinion that constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Because It affect many people more than second opinion. Constructing new railway for very fast train involve other cities in business side and trip side etc.
That is why I agree the first opinion.
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In modern, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. There are good things and bad things in this case.
In advantages, there are hard workers in country where there are younger adults more than older people. If much young people in a company, the company could be good efficiency company to work economics in a country. In this case, the country grows up to economics, workforce and business. Because we can say, if there are younger adults more than older people, a country could be rich country and people.
Moreover, they have time why is younger, they could be make new ideals to be good companies and countries. If they have new idea and it successes, it is effect to political, economics, business and management in a country.
Not only advantages but also there are disadvantages.
In disadvantage, there are few leaders in a country if there are younger adults more than older people in the country. If there are few leaders, it spends much time that to teach how to do business and management when work economics themselves. Because they have to make new business, management and somethings.
Overall, these are the advantages and disadvantages what I said.
When those compare, the advantage outweighs the disadvantages.
These can follow and support the disadvantages in the advantage to create a good country. That’s why I think It is better that there are number of younger more than number of older people in some countries.
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