Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. Thank you ! Further more, in my internship at China Daily, I found that storytelling can also be a way of advertising. For example, in the report “sisters of Yao in Guangxi: we come from Yao mountain and now we come back to it”, we used a girl's moving story to show the characteristic minority culture, to help the ethnic minority villagers to get rid of poverty by letting more people know their cultural industry. When researching and writing the report, I tried to identify the topic, angle, and way of expression that the international audience like. It turned out to be well-received and many global audiences said they wanted to visit there. After graduating, I have been working at XX company which has frequent business exchanges with countries around the world for a year and a half so far, and in the process of working with customers on products as an account manager, I have found that advertising plays a very important role in the stage when customers become interested in a product, understand its characteristics, and finally decide to buy it in the comparison of competing products.

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. Thank you ! An Illustration of IELTS scores Dear Sir or Madam, The IELTS score I am currently uploading is valid before 27 August 2021 and it now has expired. Here I explain the reasons why IELTS results within the validity period are not uploaded. Due to Covid-19 Pandemic, the IELTS test in many cities have been canceled. I have sighed up for the exams in Taiyuan, and cities near Taiyuan, like Hebei, Tianjin, and Beijing, but only to be told I was not allowed to attend. If I go to the further cities where the exams have not been canceled, I am banned from traveling because of the epidemic prevention policy. If the situation continues, I am likely to lose the opportunity to apply for this programme, so I wish to be allowed of a delay of IELTS results, and I will make it up as soon as I get a new one. Here is the detail information: I am working in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province where the pandemic continues from September 28, and the IELTS exams of October and November have been constantly announced canceled:(pictures) I also signed up for the exam in some nearby provinces like Hebei and Xi’an, but they were also canceled:(pictures) So I decided to take the exam in some farther provinces, but only to find that local epidemic prevention policy is so strict that I don't have any chance to visit there at all. Yours faithfully, Jane Jose November 13, 2022

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. Thank you ! An Illustration of IELTS scores Dear Sir or Madam, The IELTS score I am currently uploading is valid before 27 August 2021 and it now has expired. Here I explain the reasons why IELTS results within the validity period are not uploaded. Due to Covid-19 Pandemic, the IELTS test in many cities have been canceled. I have sighed up for the exams in Taiyuan, and cities near Taiyuan, like Hebei, Tianjin, and Beijing, but only to be told I was not allowed to attend. If I go to the further cities where the exams have not been canceled, I am banned from traveling because of the epidemic prevention policy. If the situation continues, I am likely to lose the opportunity to apply for this programme, so I wish to be allowed of a delay of IELTS results, and I will make it up as soon as I get a new one. Here is the detail information: I am working in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province where the pandemic continues from September 28, and the IELTS exams of October and November have been constantly announced canceled:(pictures) I also signed up for the exam in some nearby provinces like Hebei and Xi’an, but they were also canceled:(pictures) So I decided to take the exam in some farther provinces, but only to find that local epidemic prevention policy is so strict that I don't have any chance to visit there at all. Yours faithfully, Jane Jose November 13, 2022

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. Thank you ! An Illustration of IELTS scores Dear Sir or Madam, The IELTS score I am currently uploading is valid before 27 August 2021 and it now has expired. Here I explain the reasons why IELTS results within the validity period are not uploaded. Due to Covid-19 Pandemic, the IELTS test in many cities have been canceled. I have sighed up for the exams in Taiyuan, and cities near Taiyuan, like Hebei, Tianjin, and Beijing, but only to be told I was not allowed to attend. If I go to the further cities where the exams have not been canceled, I am banned from traveling because of the epidemic prevention policy. If the situation continues, I am likely to lose the opportunity to apply for this programme, so I wish to be allowed of a delay of IELTS results, and I will make it up as soon as I get a new one. Here is the detail information: I am working in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province where the pandemic continues from September 28, and the IELTS exams of October and November have been constantly announced canceled:(pictures) I also signed up for the exam in some nearby provinces like Hebei and Xi’an, but they were also canceled:(pictures) So I decided to take the exam in some farther provinces, but only to find that local epidemic prevention policy is so strict that I don't have any chance to visit there at all. Yours faithfully, Jane Jose November 13, 2022

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. If it’s too wordy, please shorten it. Thank you! Part4 Third, authority figures. For example, for the COVID 19, I will follow the channels of Dr. Zhang Wenhong and Academician Zhong Nanshan on Weibo, where I can learn professional judgment on the epidemic situation. Finally, the official website and the hotline. For example, if I want to obtain the national macroeconomic situation or industry situation, I will search the official website of the National Bureau of Statistics and the official website of the Ministry of Commerce. Similarly, information of local and organizations can also be found through the official website. If the information I need is not published online, I will call the hotline to get the first information. For international information, I will follow reputable media in each region. Such as CNN of the United States, BBC of United Kingdom, The Asahi Shimbun of Japan, Lianhe Zaobao of Singapore, and South China Morning Post of Hong Kong. If I need information about a specific region, the local media is the most detailed. In addition, for the same news event, I will compare the reports of various media because the way of reporting is different due to different political stances or perspectives, and the comparison can allow me to find a balance and distinguish relatively objective information.

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. If it’s too wordy, please shorten it. Thank you! P 3my strategies on how to get accurate and quality information For domestic news, my channels for obtaining quality information include: official media, professional media, authoritative figures, official websites and hotlines. First of all, national and local official media is my main channel for obtaining information. Regulated by the government, the quality of information of these media is guaranteed. National media such as Xinhua News Agency, People's Daily, CCTV. On a daily basis, I will browse the news pushed to me by their WeChat public accounts, but if I need to know about a specific event, I will search on their APP. I work in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province, so Shanxi Daily and Taiyuan Daily are my main windows to learn about what happens around me. Compared with Xinhuanet Shanxi Channel, local media such as Shanxi Daily respond more quickly to local news and have a richer variety of information. Secondly, the professional media. For example, to gain insight into the economic and business situation, 21st Century Business Herald, and Wall Street News are generally ahead of other newspapers in terms of the speed and quality of economic news. Third, authority figures. For example, for the COVID 19, I will follow the channels of Dr. Zhang Wenhong and Academician Zhong Nanshan on Weibo, where I can learn professional judgment on the epidemic situation.

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. If it’s too wordy, please shorten it. Thank you! part 2 Snacks are information that add to the fun. It's mostly social media, including YouTube, bilibili(a Chinese equivalent of YouTube), Zhihu(similar to Quara). On YouTube and bilibili, I am big fan of the tourism and humanities channel. although I can't come to most of the places in the world, with the videos of others, I can see what the nature and urban scenery are like, and what customs and lifestyles people have on the other side of the world. In addition, there are many learning resources on these two platforms, and I learned English and dance on them. Zhihu is where I learn about different points of view. There, I can see people sharing knowledge of their areas of expertise, or discussing on a certain event. Their perspectives are inspiring, helping me to look critically at issues.

Hi friends, please help me to correct this writing. If it’s too wordy, please shorten it. Thank you! Part 1. my media diet I spend about 3 and a half hours a day on media, and this media diet consists of two parts: a 2-hour main course + a 1.5-hour snack. The main course is the information that really helps me build my understanding of the world and society. I get it through news, books, documentaries. News is a staple food, it provides relatively raw material—events, I need to decompose and form my own thinking and judgment. I will elaborate on in Part 2 what exactly these news include. Book is protein. A good book embodies the knowledge, research, and insight into society accumulated by the author over the years. It is a chewy and complex nutrient, and after being absorbed by me, it can help me increase the profundity of thinking. One of the books I have been reading recently is Wang Min'an's "Modernity", which analyzes the essence behind the various characteristics of modern life and answers some of the confusion about society in my two years of work. The documentary is fruits and vegetables, giving me vitamins. It contains words, images, sounds, making the information rich and easy to absorb. I am keen on social and humanities documentaries, such as "7 up", which fast forward the lives of different groups, let me see what makes a person's life , and also let me reflect on my own life.

If I want to say a dance has got very fast movements and we need to make very quick gestures (I know this is a bit Chinglish), what should I say?