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Editing of screenplay's fragments 1) …It has happened suddenly. In many states of emergency declared. Hundreds of dead bodies spread across the streets. There was panic everywhere. Because of this dangerous virus... 2) [A virus of unknown origin, which can invade through the bites of the infected and their respiration. Spreading through the nerve pathways, it reaches the saliva and nerve cells of the cerebral cortex]. 3) …Government of the entire world knew how it would turn out. To crown it all, they decided to create a quarantine zone. Survivors call it The Green Valley. 4) Make a confident step to your destiny! Remember that [organization] The Light of Salvation will save you! 5) FOCUS on the rucksack and ammunition, which had been dumped. Close to this staff are weird trails. 6) They slowly disembark from the car with the weapon and nearing to the staff. People looking outwards. 7) Stephen is getting mad but reluctantly accepts to help him. He is smoke and looks up at the hill. 8) Alex is picking up the supply rucksack. Stephen is opening the door for a dog [Sarah]. Give her to smell the scarf of his disappeared friend [John]. 9) Sarah runs out of a car. She follows those trails. 10) FOCUS on the photo that is on the ground. There is a young married couple. Sarah is finding this picture. She starts to bark. Stephen noticed it. 11) Alex approaches him slowly. 12) Stephen is looking at the picture. 13) Stephen gives to smell that scarf to Sarah again. 14) Across the wood, Sarah bumping to the infected [zombified] body. FOCUS ON THE SHELL. They are near to that body. The dog is going on according to this smell. Suddenly she picked up her head and started to bark. 15) They go on. Suddenly dog rushing off somewhere.
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Editing screenplay's dialogues 1. STEPHEN. Did you find something? ALEX. There! STEPHEN. Yeah, this is his rucksack! ALEX. We have to check that! STEPHEN Yes, it has seems his... Oh, he also took half the supplies, bastard ALEX Most likely, dead boys found him. STEPHEN I hope that zombies ate him. Well, did we finished quest? Go back! I need my life. ALEX We follow the track. I think that he is nearby. STEPHEN Dude ... is there any point in continuing. Perhaps he turned into a corpse. Even if we find him alive and all wounded, we will deliver him to the shelter ... and then, hopelessly, he will go in search of his woman. ALEX My dad saved life for you at once. STEPHEN Too many times this man ran away from us, who thought that his wife was alive. He is so eager to find her. Tell me, guy, how many times have we been in the balance of death because of him? Do you remember? Oh yeah! Everyone remembers when he had a chance to be saved, but no, he still adheres to his iron principle, under our conditions! ALEX Every life is precious. We have to find him. 2. STEPHEN. Okay, but this is the last one then I’m doing it. ALEX. The tracks lead to the hill. I think he's nearby. STEPHEN. Yeah, you have to find him, girl. ALEX (Screaming). Stephen! STEPHEN. Are you an idiot? ALEX. Sorry, dude. I forgot. STEPHEN. What are there, girl? ALEX. What is on your hand? STEPHEN. She is beautiful. I would also forgot about my brains for this woman. ALEX.What are you talking about there? STEPHEN. Let go on. Sarah, keep looking. 3. STEPHEN. Sarah (dog), be quite! ALEX.He is close. Go! STEPHEN. Sarah, wait! — JOHN. Hey, girl. I miss you too. JOHN . I had never thought that I’ll say that… but I glad to see you, Stephen. STEPHEN. You look awful. Did you find your wife? JOHN. See yourself... ALEX. Hey. JOHN. Sorry, Alex… I had to do that... ALEX. It is okay. I got it. STEPHEN. Did you finish talking? Let’s go back. JOHN. Yeah, you are right. Let’s go. 4. ALEX. John, what is wrong with you? JOHN. I feel like I broke a leg. STEPHEN. Damn. JOHN. I had not thought it through enough ... the course of actions. STEPHEN. Yes, we've heard that before. ALEX. Let's go back the same way so as not to get lost. Let's go. STEPHEN. Hm, you look pathetic. Moreover, did you want to come to Juliet in that state? JOHN. The clown of you is so-so, I’ll say... STEPHEN. You’re able to make troubles only. I decided to save you because there the reason is I respect our professor.
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Editing of screenplay's fragments (2) 16) FOCUS ON THE JOHN John (30) exhausted the young man with the scars on his face. Dressed in the green shirt. He is hardly leaning on the tree. Sarah ran up to him. Then she is licking him. 17) Alex and Stephen approached him. 18) John is standing up and, by this time, he is falling. 19) Stephen is helping him to go. 20) John is grunting in pain. 21) They keep walking slowly across the trees and bushes. They noticed a few zombies who looking for fresh flesh. Zombie is a high-ossified human-like creature. Moves on all fours. It always needs to devour a living flesh. 22) Sarah is growling because she noticed infected enemies. 23) The team is trying to return imperceptibly. 24) Alex doing it. 25) Stephen runs away from his friends a few meters, making noise. It attracts the attention of infected enemies. 26) The zombies, hearing the noise, rush to Stephen. They run with their mouth wide open. Eerie screams. 27) Alex puts John in the back passenger seat. Sarah jumps into the car. 28) Stephen fires a shot towards one of the infected but misses. 29) Taking advantage of the moment, one of the infected pounces on Sergei, knocking him down. The Devourer bites Stephen's forearm, protected by his uniform. 30) Stephen pushes the infected one away with all his might. At this moment, Alex arrives in time and shoots the monster. The infected's head is torn apart by the shot. The third infected, trying to attack Stephen, also catches a bullet. Alex smashes a dead man's limb. This does not stop the creature and is still crawling, craving for living flesh. Stephen gets to his feet and finishes the monster with the butt.
25 Ağustos 2020
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Editing of screenplay's fragments 1) …It has happened suddenly. In many states of emergency declared. Hundreds of dead bodies spread across the streets. There was panic everywhere. Because of this dangerous virus... 2) [A virus of unknown origin, which can invade through the bites of the infected and their respiration. Spreading through the nerve pathways, it reaches the saliva and nerve cells of the cerebral cortex]. 3) …Government of the entire world knew how it would turn out. To crown it all, they decided to create a quarantine zone. Survivors call it The Green Valley. 4) Make a confident step to your destiny! Remember that [organization] The Light of Salvation will save you! 5) FOCUS on the rucksack and ammunition, which had been dumped. Close to this staff are weird trails. 6) They slowly disembark from the car with the weapon and nearing to the staff. People looking outwards. 7) Stephen is getting mad but reluctantly accepts to help him. He is smoke and looks up at the hill. 8) Alex is picking up the supply rucksack. Stephen is opening the door for a dog [Sarah]. Give her to smell the scarf of his disappeared friend [John]. 9) Sarah runs out of a car. She follows those trails. 10) FOCUS on the photo that is on the ground. There is a young married couple. Sarah is finding this picture. She starts to bark. Stephen noticed it. 11) Alex approaches him slowly. 12) Stephen is looking at the picture. 13) Stephen gives to smell that scarf to Sarah again. 14) Across the wood, Sarah bumping to the infected [zombified] body. FOCUS ON THE SHELL. They are near to that body. The dog is going on according to this smell. Suddenly she picked up her head and started to bark. 15) They go on. Suddenly dog rushing off somewhere.
25 Ağustos 2020
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Editing of screenplay 1. There was darkness everywhere: the cars are on the empty roads, people are all in the strong panic. The United Nations military observer patrols guard entry to the city. Security officers are making disinfecting cleaning there. Besides, soldiers are killing infected people because they can increase the risks of infection transmission. 2. The people are in the long queues for the foodstuff. The riot had taken place in this colony because it turns out that there are food-insecure. Soldiers are trying to control this situation. Also, there happened violent clashes because most of the people had to cope with the free spaces in the quarantine zones. Before entering safe places medical workers are checking people for infection in the blood. 3. In the outside, [zombified] humans are blithely searching for the fresh flesh. 4. There is a springwood. It was rainy recently: the drop of water is dripping from the lives while the river is flowing and birds singing. Dark clouds are slowly going away behind the mountains. THE HEADLIGHTS ARE IN THE MOTION 5. There are two men in the Mitsubishi Pajero SUV in the camera captured. Alex (28) is a young man. Dressed in the red sweater. Sits behind the wheel. Stephen (35) is a stern-faced man. He has a tattoo of the crow in his neck. Dressed in the black turtleneck and vest. Sarah is a big German shepherd, who sits in the backseat. This team is looking outwards. They are seeking someone. SUV stops.
25 Ağustos 2020
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