Can you correct my text? Good day! I need some help with text I wrote. Can you help me? Nowadays there are a variety of sports where you can improve your abilities or just spend a good time. Sport is very important for our health, for instance, our immune system, heart and even nervous system. If you do no sport, you can become overweight. As people says "Sports - a key to healthy living". So it's very advantageous to consider doing sport. First of all, I will speak about sport events. I'm not very keen on going to boxing or water polo, because these sports don't interest me. They are also not very popular in Lithuania. So that's way I would rather go to a basketball match. Basketball is like a second religion in our country - this sport is second to none here. There are lots of huge arenas in each Lithuanian city and the seats there very rarely empty. Yes, it's a nerve-wracking sport, but the best thing is the sense of elation when your national team wins against another and all the people in the arena unanimously chant our country's name. Even if basketball isn't in your blood, you will still be delighted by the competition, determination and daring of the players, when they are on the court. There is one more sport I relish. It is swimming. Probably I love swimming because I did this sport for several years when I was younger. Swimming gives lots of positive energy and physical strength. If you feel overworked, I strongly suggest that you visit a swimming pool and spend some hours swimming. Swimming proficiency also helps when you want to try some extreme sports, for example, extreme kayaking, which sometimes is called sheer lunacy. But if you are a good swimmer, the risk of death or injury when you descend through the torrents of a waterfall in a small kayak, is greatly reduced. Furthermore, it's very topical to know which sport events young children should be taken to and which not to be. In my opinion, the worst thing for children is to let them see violence. The children's consciousness of a world is not fully formed, so sometimes youg children could think that beating other people is absolutely normal. If I were you, I would take young kids to water polo, basketball or a football match. If you do that, you won't have to worry that your child might become a criminal in the future. To sum up, sport is a very important part of our life. It helps us to feel some kind of adventure and to improve both our physical strength and our mental energy. Sometimes sports can be gruelling, but after all our efforts we will see the world, I mean our surroundings, in different colours. Thank you very much!

Can you correct my article? Hi, friends! Can you help me to correct mistakes in my article? Nowadays there is a variety of sports, where you can improve your abilities or just spend a magnificent time. Sport is very important for our health, for instance, our immune system, heart and even nervious system. If you do no sport, you can become overweight. As people says "Sports - a key to healthy living". So, it's very profitable to wonder about sport. First of all, I would speak about sport events. I'm not very keen on going to boxing and water polo, because these sports don't interest me. They are also not very popular in Lithuania. So, that's way I would rather go to a basketball match. The basketball is like a second religion in our country - this sport is the second to none here. There are lots of huge arenas in each lithuanian city and the seats there very rarely are not fully crowded. Yes, it's a nerve-wracking sport, but the best thing is the sense of elation when your national team wons against the others and all people in the arena unanimously chant our country's name. If you are not very big basketball fan, you will delighted by competition, determination and daring of the players when they are on a stage anyhow. On the other hand, there is one more sport I relish. It is a swimming. Supposedly I love swimming, because I attended this sport for several years when I was younger. Swimming gives lots of positive energy and physical strenght. If you feel overworked, I hardly suggest you to visit a swimming pool and spend some hours swimming. Swimming abilities also helps when you want to try some extreme sports, for example, extreme kayaking, which sometimes is called as sheer lunacy. But if you are a good swimmer, the posibility of death or injury, when you descend through the torrents of a waterfall in a small kayak, is much more lesser. Furthermore, it's very topical to know to which sport event young children should be taken and to which not. In my opinion, the worst thing for childs is to let them see a violence, I mean, boxing and other sports, where players beat each other. The children's consciousness of a world is not entirely formed, so sometimes youg childs could think that beating other people is absolutely normal. If I were you, I would take young kids to water polo, basketball or football match. If you do that, you won't have to worry that your child might become even a criminal in the future. To sum up, sport is very important part of our life. It helps us to feel some kind of adventure and to improve both our physical strenght and our mental energy. Sometimes sports can be gruelling, but after all our torments we will see world, I mean our surroundings, in different colours. Thank you very much!

Sports in our life Nowadays there is a variety of sports, where you can improve your abilities or just spend a magnificent time. Sport is very important for our health, for instance, our immune system, heart and even nervious system. If you do no sport, you can become overweight. As people says "Sports - a key to healthy living". So, it's very profitable to wonder about sport. First of all, I would speak about sport events. I'm not very keen on going to boxing and water polo, because these sports don't interest me. They are also not very popular in Lithuania. So, that's way I would rather go to a basketball match. The basketball is like a second religion in our country - this sport is the second to none here. There are lots of huge arenas in each lithuanian city and the seats there very rarely are not fully crowded. Yes, it's a nerve-wracking sport, but the best thing is the sense of elation when your national team wons against the others and all people in the arena unanimously chant our country's name. If you are not very big basketball fan, you will delighted by competition, determination and daring of the players when they are on a stage anyhow. On the other hand, there is one more sport I relish. It is a swimming. Supposedly I love swimming, because I attended this sport for several years when I was younger. Swimming gives lots of positive energy and physical strenght. If you feel overworked, I hardly suggest you to visit a swimming pool and spend some hours swimming. Swimming abilities also helps when you want to try some extreme sports, for example, extreme kayaking, which sometimes is called as sheer lunacy. But if you are a good swimmer, the posibility of death or injury, when you descend through the torrents of a waterfall in a small kayak, is much more lesser. Furthermore, it's very topical to know to which sport event young children should be taken and to which not. In my opinion, the worst thing for childs is to let them see a violence, I mean, boxing and other sports, where players beat each other. The children's consciousness of a world is not entirely formed, so sometimes youg childs could think that beating other people is absolutely normal. If I were you, I would take young kids to water polo, basketball or football match. If you do that, you won't have to worry that your child might become even a criminal in the future. To sum up, sport is very important part of our life...

Can you correct a few sentences in german? Ich möchte Geld verdienen und nach Südafrika reisen um neue Tiere zu beschauen. Studium ist sehr wichtig um eine wunderbare Arbeit zu haben. Ich esse gern gesunde Ernährung (I like eating healthy food). In Freizeit gucke ich viele Filme, weil ich meine Deutschsprachkenntnisse und Englischsprachkenntnisse verbessern will. Thank you for you help! Vielen Dank für ihre Hilfe!

Can you correct my friendly letter? Liebe Sally, Ich freute sich sehr, das du in Litauen seinem Urlaub haben will. Ich weiß eine schöne Platze für deinen Urlaub. Das ist Trakai. Das ist eine wunderbare historische Platze mit einem größen See. Du kannst hier schwimmen, joggen und viele andere Sports treiben und das Hotel kostet nicht viel hier. Also kannst du nach Vilnius fahren. Hier sind viele Museen. Also sind hier viele Cafes, wo kannst du eine fantastische Essen haben. Du muss TV Tauer besuchen. Hier kannst du alle Vilnius beschauen. Ich denke, dass du eine gute Zeit in Litauen verbringen werden und später züruck kommen will. Mit herzlichen Grüßen, Peter Thank you very much for your corrections! Vielen Dank für ihre Hilfe!

Is this invitation correct? Lieber Joe, Ich möchte dich ins meine Geburtstag am Freitag einladen. Komm nach mein Haus. Wir werden Karten spielen und tanzen. Wenn du kommst, senden mir SMS bitte. Ich werde dich im Park zutreffen. Dann werden wir nach mein Haus meinen Geburtatag feiern gehen. Tshüss! Dein, Peter Can you correct this invitation and give me some advice? Thank you very much! Vielen Dank für ihre Hilfe!

Can you help me? Hi! Can you correct my explanations of german words? gemessen - man, der alles nicht schnell macht und viel meint. kleidsam - schön. erstaunlich - wunderbar oder sehr gut. tätig - aktiv. träge - man, der Hausaufgabe machen nicht will. amüsant - man, der immer eine sehr gute Laune hat. diskret - man, der nie nich nachgebt. lebendig - man, der immer viel Energie hat. delikat - man, der sehr sensibel ist und viel weint. maßgebend - man, der sehr autoritär ist. Thank you very much! Vielen Dank für ihre Hilfe!

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Can you advise me? Hi! Can you correct my note below and say a few words about it? Dear Marta, How are you? I hope that everything is fine. I want to invite you to the nutritious food party on Sunday. We‘ll have a lot of chicken sandwiches accompanied by raw vegetables. It will be a party like in the good old days. See you there! Love, Jack Thank you for your help!