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Careful people can avoid illness
this was my English exam question:-
write a paragraph of seven sentences about (Careful people can avoid illness)
that is what i wrote:
It's now clear that our health plays a very important role in our life and we can't do without it.From this point careful people spare no effort to avoid illness.
To avoid illness we should remember some rules.First of all we should always wash our hands ofter and before a meal.We should wash more often in hot weather or when we have been to a gym.
We mustn't eat food that smiles bad as it may be poisonous.We should always cover our food so flies can't pass their germs on to it . We should boil tap water before drinking it to kill any germs. We must try not to eat food from cans as it may be bad.
If we do so,we will have a good health and never suffer from illness.
any mistakes?
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tripe to cairo
last month i went to Cairo on a trip with my brothers.
we set of at 8.30 am and arrived in Cairo at 11 pm. our first destination was The Hanging Church. it was my first visit to a church ever.our next destination was Amer Ebn El A'as mosque .it's a very large mosque where we prayed.then we went to The historic Cairo . there ,we saw Ahmed Ebn tolon mosque while was built about one thousand years ago.
at Ahmed Ebn Tolon ' we saw a lot of touristic groups .
the mosque faces mohamed Ali castle which played a very important role many years ago.
after that we set of again to El Ashar mosque which is well known all over the Islamic world.
after praying we set of to Kan El-kalili which is the best place to do the shopping in whole Egypt.we bought a lot of things and took lots of photographies.
at 10 pm we set of again but this time our destination was home.
we were both glad and sad to leave this wonderful place and surely we well visit another fantastic place in our beloved Egypt.
29 Kasım 2012
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choose the correct answer
if they didn't find him in time ,they...... saved his life
a)would b)would be c)wouldn't have d)must have
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my new school
this year i went to a new school.it's called Kassem Ameen high school for girls.
it's a very large school with two central building. each one consists of three floors .there are two bath rooms in each floor. there are 20 class room for the first year students.that is my first year at high school. our staff is very professional.most of my class teachers spent more than 20 years at teaching and there is a teacher spent 35 years.our headmistress is a very good woman who runs it wisely.there are 29 girl in my class but in the other classes there are more than 45 student in class. the 29 girls of our class are really helpful and they act as it they were sisters. i really love my new school
26 Ekim 2012
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Sweet dreams
I am going to write about my dreams.
when I leave school in a few years, I want to go to the faculty of medicine.
I want to be a surgeon or an oculist.
When I graduate, I want to get the PhD from the UK or USA.
I want to continue the procession of Dr. Magdy Ya'kop
If I couldn't go to the faculty of medicine, I wish to go to the faculty of science .
I wish to discover a cure to many fatal diseases like cancer and virus c ....etc.
Now, I do my best to get high marks to be able to go to the faculty of medicine and achieve my dreams.
dear friends,please,correct it for me.
5 Ağustos 2012
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difference between life in the city and life in the country
There is a great difference between life in the city and life in the country.
In cities there are better schools and shops. There are many places to visit.
Also there are more jobs in cities than in the country.
In the country there is plenty of space and fresh air.
There are too few jobs in the country.
On the other hand there is a lot a pollution and traffic jams.
Goods in the country is cheaper than in the cities.
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Tourism is Egypt
It's now clear that tourism can play a very important role in our economy.From that point the government pays much attention to it.Tourism is nearly the main resource of income in Egypt.
Egypt is very rich of touristic places such as the pyramids,the Sphinx ,resorts,ancient temples,landscapes in the northern coast,...etc.
The most thing that attracts tourists is the weather in Egypt which is usually sunny.
The view of the Nile in the middle of Cairo when the sun rises is invaluable.
In the range of 10 million visitor visits Egypt every year.and most of them enjoy it a lot.
The government encourages tourism by providing the tour guides,improving the services and making advertisement.
The Egyptian airline which is called Egypt Air is transporting millions of passengers all over Egypt and abroad.
The Egyptian people also give a hand by helping tourist and guiding them.
That's all about tourism in Egypt and that's why it is adored.
please correct the mistakes ^_^
18 Temmuz 2012
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Nabawiya Musa
Nabawiya Musa was the first Egyptian woman to go to high school.
When she was older she helped other women to succeed in educational work.
She wrote a very famous book in 1908.it was about girls education.
She also became the headmistress of El-Mohamadiya school for girls.
She was a very important person in the Egyptian history.
18 Temmuz 2012
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Doctor Ali Moustafa Mosharafa
Dr.Ali Moustafa was an Egyptian theoretical physicist.He was born on 11 July 1898,in Damietta,Egypt.
He was one of Albert Einstein's students and was called the Arabs Einstein.
He was graduated from the supreme school of teachers in 1917.then he got the PH.D. in philosophy of science in 1923.In 1924 he was the first Egyptian to get the stage of D.Sc from London university.
After that he worked as a teacher in the supreme school of teachers.then he was given the designation of teacher before his thirties.
In 1936 he was elected to be the chancellor of the faculty of science.He was the first chancellor for it.
Dr. Ali was the teacher of many famous scientist like Dr.Samera Mosa,Dr.Fahmi Khalil Mekhail,etc.
On 15 January 1950 Dr.Ali died after a very full history.his death was very mysterious.Some people say he was poisoned and some people say one of the king infiltrator killed hem.
Althou Dr. mosharafa is died,he still alive in our hearts
pleaseeeeeeeee correct this passage
14 Temmuz 2012
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My best friend
My best friend is called Lolo.Our first meeting was at preparatory school.We immediately liked each other.And we have been friends ever since.
Ofter a very short time we discovered that we have the same interests and hobbies.
At the English class we get used to answer all questions correctly and get the top marks in our exams.
Lolo is a very friendly,lovely and helpful girl who is loved from everybody I guess..
When we are free we like to chat,learning foreign languages and draw funny pictures.
Now we are planning to have friends from all over the world.
After we leave school she hopes to be an a star or a tour guide but me i hope to be a doctor.
I hope me and Lolo will be friends for ever ^_^
6 Temmuz 2012
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