The Tim じぁん!!!
It was overcast today. After a few transfers, we finally arrived in Hong Kong. My dad's friend warmly welcomed us and treated us—it's truly wonderful to have friends everywhere. Once we were settled at the hotel, we had dinner at a restaurant with a history spanning over 100 years. They served a large puff pastry that I had never seen before. I appreciate this place, except for the traffic. Notably, my dad brought along my diary so that I could jot down these experiences here at the hotel—how thoughtful of him!
2024年1月8日 15:07
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It was overcast today. After a few transfers, we finally arrived in Hong Kong. My dad's friend warmly welcomed us and treated us—it is truly wonderful to have friends everywhere. Once we were settled at the hotel, we had dinner at a restaurant with a history spanning over 100 years. They served a large puff pastry that I had never seen before. I appreciate this place, except for the traffic. Notably, my dad brought along my diary so I could jot down these experiences here at the hotel. How thoughtful of him!
Your recount of arriving in Hong Kong is quite vivid and engaging! You've effectively used descriptive language to paint the picture of your day, from the overcast weather to the historic restaurant dinner. The personal touch of mentioning your dad's thoughtfulness in bringing your diary adds a warm element to your story. To make your writing even more compelling, focus on varying your sentence structures for rhythm and impact. Keep up the good work and continue to share these wonderful experiences!
2024年1月8日
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It was overcast today. After a few transfers, we finally arrived in Hong Kong.
My dad's friend warmly welcomed us and treated us—it's truly wonderful to have
friends everywhere. Once we were settled at the hotel, we had dinner at a
restaurant with a history spanning over 100 years. They served a large puff
pastry that I had never seen before. I appreciate this place, except for the
traffic. Notably, my dad brought along my diary so that I could jot down these
experiences here at the hotel—how thoughtful of him!
Great! How long will you be there for?
2024年1月8日
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