Tough Days
My boyfriend went back to France few weeks ago, after that we broke up. I had lost in my in sadness for a few days before I realize that I must move on.
I have been considering of my future these days. Now I am struggling with my master degree, my major is Detection Technology, staffs like flow measurement. I make the decision to go abroad for further education after graduate. What puzzled me is that whether I should change my major since I can't have many choices staying in my field. Anyway, English is the most urgent matter for now.
Hi, Stefanie. Your English is of a fairly good standard. I have made a few amendments (in capitals) as to how your article would read better in English.
Tough Days
My boyfriend went back to France few weeks ago AND after that we broke up. I WAS (had lost in my) LOST in sadness for a few days before I REALISED (realize) that I must move on.
I have been considering (of) my future IN RECENT (these) days. Now I am struggling with my master degree, my major BEING (is) Detection Technology, STUFF (staffs) like flow measurement. I HAVE MADE (make) the decision to go abroad for further education after I graduate. What IS PUZZLING (puzzled) me is (that) whether I should change my major, since I WILL HAVE LIMITED (can't have many) choices BY staying in my field. Anyway, English is the most urgent matter for now.
You have take the future market into your consideration . Do more efforts to understand the future market will be and target your postgraduate study or research with preseverance
