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- Challenge one text every day Yeaaah seventh text! I've already been writing one text for onewhole week! First of all, I'd like to say to my friend Luiza, who accepted the challenge, that's being awesome! I am reading what you've writen, I wish you're enjoying the contest as much as I am doing. Thanks everyboy who has been correcting our texts or giving us suggestions. I've got to be honest I am focussed on improving my English writing skills, and that's the reason I've whitten more texts in English rather than in another languages. But I promess I'll write more in Spanish as well. I now I'll be obligated to reduce the amount of time I've currently been espending in learning English, because Monday my classes starts at University. On other hand I am glad I am about to finish off doing the exercises of the Supplementay English Grammar book from Cambridge.LoL I am goint to study through a new book during the semester. I would apreciate if you corrected another text that I've writen a time ago and It still without any correction. http://www.italki.com/entry/525418 Text 007/365. A friend ( Luiza Zerlotini) and I are going to write one text per day for one year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions, ideas. =D
Mar 4, 2015 3:17 AM
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Challenge Writing, One Essay Per Day one text every day

 

Yeaaah Yaaaay! My seventh /essay/piece of writing! text!

I've already [in personal, informal or lighthearted piece, such contractions are OK and make the tone casual, friendly and warm.  Each kind of writing has their own rules] been writing one text essay for onewhole the entire week!


First of all, [Too formal, this is not an argument piece. Sounds too lecturing] I'd like to say to thank my friend Luiza, who had accepted the this challenge of having to write an essay a day for the week.  , that's being This is so awesome! I am have been reading what you've had written, and I wish hope you're enjoying the contest this endeavor [this is for the good for the both of you.  So don't take it as a competition to see who is the winner.  In the end, both of you will win in this language war you are trying to master] as much as I have am doing. Also, I would like to thanks everyboy those who has been had been correcting us and our texts or giving us suggestions. I've got To be honest, I am focussed focusing on improving my English writing skills., and that's the reason I've written more texts in Hence so many more English pieces rather than in another languages. But Anyway, I promess will promise to I'll write more in Spanish as well.


have to cut down  now I'll be obligated to reduce the amount of time spent on my  I've currently been espending in learning English as my university classes start on , because Monday my classes starts at University. On the  other hand I am glad that I had completed all  am about to finish off doing the exercises of in the supplementay English grammar book from Cambridge.__LoL Now I am goint to study go through another new book during for the new semester.

I would apreciate Most appreciative if you can corrected another text this other piece that I've written a /time ago/while back.  and It is still without any correction. Sigh...

 

For your easy reference... http://www.italki.com/entry/525418

Text 007/365.
A friend ( Luiza Zerlotini) and I are going to write one text per an essay each day for one year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions, and ideas. Thanks! =D 

March 4, 2015
I really enjoy your texts as well, dear friend! ;) Hope to read more from you. Let's go, It's still posible to do 365 texts at this year. We can post more than a text per day! hahaha!
March 27, 2015

- Challenge one text every day

Yeaaah seventh text!

I've already been writing one text for one whole week!
First of all, I'd like to say to my friend Luiza, who accepted the challenge, that it's being awesome! I am reading what you've writen, I wish hope you're enjoying the contest as much as I am doing. Thanks everyboy who has been correcting our texts or giving us suggestions. I've got to be honest I am focussed on improving my English writing skills, and that's the reason I've written more texts in English rather than in an other languages. But I promise  I'll write more in Spanish as well.
I know I'll be obligated to reduce the amount of time I've currently been e spending in learning English, because on Monday my classes start s at University. On other hand I am glad I am about to finish off doing the exercises of the Supplementay English Grammar book from Cambridge. LoL I am going to study throughly a new book during the semester.

I would apreciate it if you corrected another text that I've writen a time (a while ago) ago which is and It still without any correction.
http://www.italki.com/entry/525418

Text 007/365.
A friend ( Luiza Zerlotini) and I are going to write one text per day for one year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions, ideas. =D

 

Very good. A great initiative.

March 5, 2015
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