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In my viewpoint, we should priorly keep ourselves ready in order to face any harsh weather. First of all, we should access the situation so that we can prominently manage the scenario. After the assessment, we should plan some coping strategies for instance wearing mask in highly polluted areas. Once the planning is done, then we should implement those strategies in order to evaluate the outcome. These are the basic steps to effectively manage a situation.
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In my viewpoint, we should priorly? keep ourselves ready in order to face any
harsh weather. First of all, we should access the situation so that we can
prominently manage the scenario. After the assessment, we should plan some
coping strategies for instance wearing masks in highly polluted areas. Once the
planning is done, then we should implement those strategies in order to evaluate
the outcome. These are the basic steps to effectively manage a situation.
Not bad. Very formal tone with lots of business vocabulary.
What do you mean by "priorly"? I don't understand that. This word doesn't exist. The rest is really good. Just mask is plural in this sentence. Well done.
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المدعو
Well, I think it’s best if we try to be prepared at all times for all types of harsh weather. Firstly, we need to assess the situation so that we can
Be better able to manage the situation. After this, the next thing we need to do is to create a plan of action on how to mitigate the problem. Once we have a plan, we can then start taking meaningful and effective actions. These are the basic steps we need to follow to get through this type of situation.
I agree with the other people who said that the original wording was too formal. But also, the wording was not common and had some inaccuracies. I changed many words here because this sounds very foreign originally, this is something a bit more common that you might a native saying. :)
Best of luck :))
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In my viewpoint, we should priorly keep ourselves ready in order to face any
harsh weather. First of all, we should access the situation so that we can
prominently manage the scenario. After the assessment, we should plan some
coping strategies for instance wearing mask in highly polluted areas. Once the
planning is done, then we should implement those strategies in order to evaluate
the outcome. These are the basic steps to effectively manage a situation.
I was trying to use prior ( in the context of "in advance") as an adverb. I also thought that the same for mask.. but thank you a lot for correcting my mistakes as well as for giving a positive comment. Means a lot Sir:).
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Bharti Kataria
المهارات اللغوية
الإنجليزية, الألمانية, الهندية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية, الألمانية
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