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I got my new hair cut yesterday. I feel like it’s brand new me but it seems like most people around me doesn’t think so. The topic about my hair style was never talked today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style.
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I got my new haircut yesterday. I feel like it’s a brand new me but it seems like most people around me don’t think so. No one mentioned/noticed my hair style today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style.
Haircut is one word. If you say you got 'a hair cut', that means you had ONE hair that got cut. Not a huge deal though - many native speakers would probably make the same mistake. PEOPLE is plural.
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I got my new hair cut yesterday. I feel like it’s brand new me but it seems like most people around me doesn’t think so. The topic about my hair style was never talked today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style. hello can we practice together?
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I got a new hair cut yesterday. I feel like a brand new-person but it seems most people around me doesn’t think so. TNobody even mentioned my hair. I don’t care though. I like my new hair style.
Very good. I changed two of your sentences just to make them sound more natural.
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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!

لا تفوّت فرصة تعلّم لغة جديدة وأنت مرتاح في منزلك. تصفّح مجموعتنا المختارة من مدرّسي اللغات ذوي الخبرة وسجّل في درسك الأول الآن!