Agustín
First, I put on my pyjamas and then I brush my teeth, not lest than 3 minutes as my dentist always recommend to do. Before going to bed I read or watch tv for a while laying on the living room’s sofa. Finally, when I begin to feel tired I put down the book or switched off the tivi and take my way to bed. Good night!
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First, I put on my pyjamas and then I brush my teeth, for no less than 3 minutes as my dentist always recommend to do. Before going to bed I read or watch tv for a while while laying on the living room’s sofa. Finally, when I begin to feel tired I put down the book or switch off the tv and make my way to bed. Good night!
That’s great! You needed 2 “while”s. 1 to say that you have been watching tv for a while. The other to say that you do this while lying on the sofa! Hope this helps :)
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First, I put on my pyjamas and then I brush my teeth, not less than 3 minutes as my dentist always recommends to do so. Before going to bed I read or watch tv for a while laying on the living room’s sofa. Finally, when I begin to feel tired I put down the book or switch off the TV and make my way to bed. Good night!
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