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wendy
Before answering this question,let me calm down for a second.About one year ago,there was terrible accident happened during a marathon near my hometown.The athletes started with sunshine and just wore little layers.But a few hours later,it began to rain and the temperature in the mountain dropped down to nearly zero.Though it was summer,the athletes needed to cross a lot of mountain road.In that case,some one got lost including some famous athletes.They couldn't find any people and began to lose the temperature without coat.The result was heartbreaking.Almost 20 people lost their lives.After that accident,more and more people realized that when people faced extreme weather we just like tiny dust in the world and fill with despair.If the sponsor checked the weather carefully and prepared more materials for the athletes,the athletes were not overconfident,we could absolutely prevent the accident.Safety first,it is very important when you face typhoon,strom or other extreme weather.Stay home,stay safe, Never believe you can do anything unless you are well-prepared.We should respect our nature anytime no matter he is happy or angry.
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Before answering this question, let me calm down for a second. About one year ago, a terrible accident happened during a marathon near my hometown. The athletes started under a nice sunshine and were lightly dressed. But a few hours later, it began to rain and the temperature in the mountain dropped down to nearly zero. Though it was summer, the athletes needed to cross a lot of mountain roads. Because of that people, including some famous athletes, got lost. They couldn't find anyone to help and began to freeze since they were not wearing a coat. The result was heartbreaking, almost 20 people lost their lives. After that accident, more and more people realized that when we are faced with extreme weather, we feel like we are just a tiny particle of dust in the world and we get filled with despair. If the sponsor checked the weather carefully and prepared more materials for the athletes, the athletes were not overconfident, we could absolutely prevent the accident. Safety first, it is very important when you face a typhoon, a storm or other extreme weather. Stay home, stay safe, never believe you can do anything unless you are well-prepared. We should respect our nature anytime no matter if it is happy or angry.
Good work. I wasn't aware of that tragedy, it's sad indeed.
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