I was set a task to write a formal letter. Could you please check it for me?
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with reference to your advertisement that was posted
on your hotel’s website for a summer job as a receptionist. I found myself fit
enough for this position. The reason why I would like to apply for this job is
that I am studying hotel management and as part of the course we have to gain
some experience working in a hotel. In this letter I will try to explain why I
will be suited for the job and what I am hoping to learn from it. I have been
I have been studying hotel management for three years now. I have completed several courses
on how to attend to customers and how to deal with difficult types of people.
During these courses, I received positive feedback about my communication skills.
I also suppose that I have some personal characteristics that are required from
a receptionist. I have drive, ambition, I am a self-starter and good at working
in a team. Last summer I worked as a sales assistant at the supermarket and this
experience taught me the value of being attentive to customers’ needs and
preferences. I hope that working in your hotel will teach me a lot. I need to
develop my understanding of hotel management and gain some insight into the
process. Do you mind me asking if it would be possible for me to have breakfast
at your hotel while I am working? Surely I will pay for it. Yours sincerely,
Michael Doff.