It is my IELTS Task 1 essay: "The map (I don’t think map is the right word, plan or diagram is better) illustrates the changes to the ground floor of a library between 2001 and 2009. Overall, the southern part of the ground floor remained unchanged (intact means it hasn’t been physically altered) throughout the period, while the rest of it underwent some significant changes, such as the addition of several book sections and a children’s area. (I think the increased IT is worth mentioning here) Looking at the diagrams in more detail, in 2001, people could enter the ground floor through the entrance in the south of the library, which was in front of the librarian’s desk and next to the stairs. There were eight small tables located in the center, leading to the fiction section at the north end. The remaining part consisted of the self help and history section in a row on the eastern side, and the section of newspapers and periodicals taking up the opposite side. Eight years later, in 2009, no changes had been made to the entrance, librarian’s desk and stairs. However, in the middle of the ground floor, eight small tables were replaced by four new bigger ones. In the eastern part of the library, the area of the self help and history sections were reduced to make space for the addition of fiction, kitchen, economics, and law sections. The original fiction section was converted into children’s books and was now adjacent to a new children’s area. Finally, two new computers were located next to the area containing Films and DVDs" Hope to receive your feedback.