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The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my friends. The café was very famous, so there were many high school students and couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for a long time. I felt very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings changed. Inside the café, there were many cute foods and beautiful Christmas decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I want to visit the café again next year. On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was full of delicious smells. I ate a lot, and I became very full. We also wore Santa Claus and reindeer headbands. It made us feel more like Christmas. We took many pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends. It became a great memory for me.
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The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my friends. The café is very famous, so there were many high school students and couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for quite a long time. I felt very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings changed. Inside the café, there were many cute desserts and beautiful Christmas decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I want to visit the café again next year.
On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was filled with delicious aroma. I ate a lot, and I was very full. We also wore Santa Claus and reindeer headbands. It made us feel even more like it was Christmas. We took many pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends. It became a great memory for me.
٣ يناير ٢٠٢٦ ١٣:٢٣
The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my
friends. The café was very famous, so there were many high school students and
couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for a long time. I felt
very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings
changed. Inside the café, there were many cute foods and beautiful Christmas
decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The
decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas
atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I
want to visit the café again next year. On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with
my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and
desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas
party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was full of
delicious smells. I ate a lot, and I became very full. We also wore Santa Claus
and reindeer headbands. It made us feel more like Christmas. We took many
pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends.
It became a great memory for me.
Very well written, well done.
I would change some small sentences to be more natural:
It (the Santa clause and reindeer headband) made it (the party) feel more like Christmas.
I had a lot of fun and a happy Christmas
٢ يناير ٢٠٢٦ ١٣:٠٧
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naiho_3
المهارات اللغوية
الإنجليزية, اليابانية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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