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I think the best marketing campaign was made by Apple. It was a successful campaign which was directed by Mr. Jobs. He was not only founder of company but also had an amazing leader and director of a company. He stood up a company which collapsed and lost it’s reputation badly. However this company’s sales margin shrink he managed to increase it with inventing iPhone then used a effective marketing campaigning which attracted many people’s attention positively. After he managed to navigate it’s marketing campaign wisely, we have sold huge amounts of products I have ever heard. This management has been still using his leadership wisely. So that they are one of the most valuable companies in the world nowadays.
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I think the best marketing campaign was done by Apple. It was a successful campaign which was directed by Mr. Jobs. He was not only the founder of the company, but also was an amazing leader and director of a company. He propped up a company which had collapsed and badly lost it’s reputation. Although this company’s sales margin had shrunk, he managed to increase it by inventing the iPhone and then using an effective marketing campaign which caught many people’s attention. After he managed to navigate its marketing campaign wisely, they sold the largest amount of products I have ever heard of. The management has still been using his leadership wisely so they are one of the most valuable companies in the world today.
👍 I changed some of the word order to make it sound more natural. Good job!
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I think the best marketing campaign was made by Apple. It was a successful campaign which was directed by Mr. Jobs. He was not only founder of company but also had an amazing leader and director of a company. He stood up a company which collapsed and lost it’s reputation badly. However this company’s sales margin shrink he managed to increase it with inventing iPhone then used a effective marketing campaigning which attracted many people’s attention positively. After he managed to navigate it’s marketing campaign wisely, we have sold huge amounts of products I have ever heard. This management has been still using his leadership wisely. So that they are one of the most valuable companies in the world nowadays.
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