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If anyone can make corrections into natural English I’d appreciate it! My 3-line a day. 201002 Every time I go on a business trip for more than 3days,I always bring tiny rice cooker with me. I enjoy local food but I get tired of eating out after a few days. And my body starts craving simple meal. The rice ball that’s made of fresh cooked rice is the best!
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If anyone can make corrections into natural English I’d appreciate it! My 3-line a day. 201002 Every time I go on a business trip for more than 3days,I always bring tiny rice cooker with me. I enjoy local food but I get tired of eating out after a few days. And my body starts craving simple meal. The rice ball that’s made of fresh cooked rice is the best!
Good job! Here’s some very small corrections I made, hope this helps you! Every time I go on a business trip for more than 3 days, I always bring “a” tiny rice cooker with me. I enjoy local food, but I get tired of eating out after a few days. And my body starts craving “a” simple meal. “A” rice ball that’s made of fresh cooked rice is the best!
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هل تريد التطور بشكل أسرع؟
انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!
mina
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية, اليابانية
لغة التعلّم
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية
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