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The painting show took me around 1. 5hour, the second and third lesson. The reciting rehearsal took my time for napping. I was free during the 6th and 9th lesson, but didn't fully use time, only watching YouTube videos. I drove home with taro pies from MacDonald, and arrived home at 19ish. After half an hour reading of Google news, I went running along a river, finishing 10 kilometers run. I'm quite busy today, but haven't done anything meaningful. How to change my situation?

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Can somebody correct this article? 
The painting show took me around 1. 5hour, the second and third lesson. The reciting rehearsal took my time for napping. I was free during the 6th and 9th lesson, but didn't fully use time, only watching YouTube videos. I drove home with taro pies from MacDonald, and arrived home at 19ish. After half an hour reading of Google news, I went running along a river, finishing 10 kilometers run. I'm quite busy today, but haven't done anything meaningful. How to change my situation?

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The painting show took me around 1. 5hour, the second and third lesson. The reciting rehearsal took my time for napping. I was free during the 6th and 9th lesson, but didn't fully use *the* time, *I was* watching YouTube videos. I drove home with taro pies from MacDonald, and arrived home at 19ish. After half an hour *of* reading Google news, I went running along a river, finishing *a 10 kilometer run*. I'm quite busy today, but haven't done anything meaningful. How *do* I change my situation?

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If you post in the EXERCISES section it's easier to make corrections.

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