Isabelle
Day 4. Just as usual, I sat down to do my writing routine pretty late. I deserve a pat on the head: today it was 11 pm, not almost midnight. What I should write today had been chosen even before, somewhere at dinner time. So, I gave myself a task: write an absurd story using the words I’ve recently learned (or learned long ago, but never turned to the active vocabulary). An hour for such an exercise is enough, for sure. However, I wouldn’t be myself if I wasn't stuck on the creating the plot stage. After some fruitless efforts, I started mindlessly generating ideas using one random plot generator. Perhaps I should’ve stopped at one and just used it, as I was running out of time as usual ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ But! I created some kind of setting myself. It’s bad, it’s even stupid, but it’s mine, so I guess it’s actually better. Anyway, I don’t have enough time to turn my story template into an actual, readable text —it’s just a bunch of keywords and keyphrases¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I’m disorganized and silly, but I keep trying to get myself together!
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Day 4. Just as usual, I sit down to do my writing routine pretty late. I deserve a pat on the head. It is 11 pm, not nearly midnight. What I write today has been chosen earlier, sometime at dinner. I gave myself a task: Write an absurd story using the words I’ve recently learned (or learned long ago but never turned to the active vocabulary). An hour for such an exercise is enough for sure; however, I wouldn’t be myself if I weren’t stuck on the stage of creating the plot. After some fruitless efforts, I start to mindlessly generating ideas using one random plot generator. Perhaps I should’ve stopped at one and just used it, as I am running out of time as usual ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ But! I created some kind of setting. It’s bad, it’s even stupid, but it’s mine, so I guess it’s actually better. Anyway, I don’t have enough time to turn my story template into an actual, readable text —it’s just a bunch of keywords and keyphrases¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I’m disorganized and silly, but I keep trying to get myself together!
I loved reading this! I made some grammatical changes since I’m an ELA teacher and can’t help it.
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Day 4. Just as usual, I sat down to do my writing routine pretty late. I deserve a pat on the head: today it was 11 pm, not almost midnight. What I should write today had been chosen even before, somewhere at dinner time. So, I gave myself a task: write an absurd story using the words I’ve recently learned (or learned long ago, but never turned to the active vocabulary). An hour for such an exercise is enough, for sure. However, I wouldn’t be myself if I wasn't stuck on the creating the plot stage. After some fruitless efforts, I started mindlessly generating ideas using one random plot generator. Perhaps I should’ve stopped at one and just used it, as I was running out of time as usual ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ but I created some kind of setting! (The exclamation mark is always at the end of the sentence) It’s bad, it’s even stupid, but it’s mine, so I guess it’s actually better. Anyway, I don’t have enough time to turn my story template into an actual, readable text —it’s just a bunch of keywords and keyphrases¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I’m disorganized and silly, but I keep trying to get myself together!
Your grammar and sentence construction is a but disjointed. That needs a bit of work otherwise your storytelling abilities are well enough. 👌🏾
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