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Thanks to going to bed around 10:30 p.m. yesterday, I was able to wake up before 6 a.m. today. However, I went back to sleep and finally woke up at 8 a.m. After that, I spent a lot of time watching TikTok on my phone, playing a soccer game, and watching YouTube on TV. Before I knew it, it was already afternoon. I wanted to clean my room, do the laundry, and make appointments for my hair and nails, but I couldn’t do anything. I have work from 3 p.m. today, so I quickly did my makeup and am on my way now. The weather is nice today, and I have an eight-hour shift at my Yokohama workplace for the first time in a while. To make myself feel better, I am wearing my favorite Comme des Garçons T-shirt for the first time. I think it will be busy today. A lot of small flies appeared in my room yesterday, so I also have to kill them. There are mosquitoes too, and my legs are itchy in some places. I will do my best today too!
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Thanks to going to bed at around 10:30 p.m. yesterday, I was able to wake up before 6 a.m. today. However, I went back to sleep and finally woke up at 8 a.m. After that, I spent a lot of time watching TikTok on my phone, playing a football game, and watching YouTube on TV. Before I knew it, it was already afternoon. I wanted to clean my room, do the laundry, and make appointments to get my hair and nails done, but I didn’t get anything done. I have work from 3 p.m. today, so I quickly put on my makeup and am on my way now. The weather is nice today, and I have an eight-hour shift at my Yokohama workplace for the first time in a while. To make myself feel better, I’m wearing my favourite Comme des Garçons T-shirt for the first time. I think it will be busy today. A lot of tiny flies appeared in my room yesterday, so I also have to get rid of them. There are mosquitoes too, and my legs are itchy in several places. I’ll do my best today too!
Level: C1. This is a very natural and engaging diary entry. You describe your day in detail, and your ideas flow smoothly from one event to the next. Your grammar is strong, and the corrections mainly involve making certain expressions sound more idiomatic in British English. Excellent work! 😊
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