Hi! I would improve it like this... WHAT IS THE FIRST THING YOU NOTICE ABOUT SOMEONE YOU MEET FOR THE FIRST TIME? PART 2 You have well-groomed hands, which may mean that you're doing a kind of job which doesn't involve using your hands or that you're just someone who loves taking care of yourself. If your fingernails are bitten or chewed off, you may be an anxious or nervous person. Or if you are wearing nail polish, you're probably someone who loves fashion. To sum it all up, hands can give you lots of information about the person standing in front of you. Of course, it's not an "exact science", so most of the time you can only guess until you actually get to know that person. Anyway, observing hands can be a fun way to determine whether you might be a good investigator! I split the answer in half. If you're willing to correct me, please look for part 1 too. Thank you!