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Today I went to a festival near my house. I ate a lot of delicious food. I really like summer because there are many festivals and fireworks. Summer is very hot, but it is also fun. I want to enjoy this season as much as I can and make many happy memories with my friends and family.
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Today, I went to a festival near my house. I ate a lot of delicious food. I really like summer because there are many festivals and fireworks displays. Summer is very hot, but it is also enjoyable. I want to make the most of this season and create many happy memories with my friends and family.
Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe your experience clearly and express your feelings about summer in a very natural way. Your grammar is accurate, and only small vocabulary improvements were needed to make the text sound more polished. Excellent work,keep it up! 😊
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انضم لمجتمع التعلّم هذا وجرّب التمرينات المجانية!
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المهارات اللغوية
الإنجليزية, اليابانية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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