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Today, I went to Round One of a competition after classes. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. In fact, I have English and biology classes tomorrow. Furthermore, I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
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Today, I went to Round One after classes. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. I have English and biology classes tomorrow. I also have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.
Level: C1. Your writing is clear, fluent, and easy to follow. The only issue was the phrase “Round One of a competition,” which changes the meaning unintentionally. Apart from that, the grammar is accurate, and the only suggestions were to make the text sound more natural by removing a couple of unnecessary linking expressions. Excellent work! 😊
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