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Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going talk about my summer vacation. In July, I went to Amami island where my grandparents are living in. I went to there with my friends. Amami island has very beautiful ocean and nature. However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad. We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean. We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit and went for a drive.I had a lot of fun. In August, I went camping in Ibaraki Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue and bathed together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy. I have many other memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
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Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going to talk about my summer vacation. In In July, I went to Amami Island, where my grandparents were living. I went there with my friends. Amami Island has a very beautiful ocean and nature. However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad. We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean. We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit, and went for a drive. I had a lot of fun. In August, I went camping in Ibaraki Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue, and bathed together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy. I have many other memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
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Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going talk about my summer vacation. In July, I went to Amami island where my grandparents are living. I went there with my friends. Amami island has a very beautiful ocean and nature. However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad. We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean. We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit and went for a drive.I had a lot of fun. In August, I went camping in Ibaraki Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue and bathed together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy. I have many other memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
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