First, I eat breakfast with my family in the morning. Then we go to the park and take pictures. Next, I play with my little sister and we laugh. After that, we eat ice cream under the sun. Finally, we go home and watch a movie together.

First, I eat breakfast with my family in the morning. Then, we go to the park and take pictures. Next, I play with my little sister and we laugh. After that, we eat ice cream under the sun. Last, (or "Lastly" if you want to be more formal) we go home and watch a movie together. ________ Great job! The only issues concern word misspellings. Unfortunately, English-learners just have to memorize the proper spellings of words (even though they may make no sense).