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Natalia
My favourite hobby is snowboarding. Snowboarding gives me mountains, amazing view, speed, feel of fly and a lot of fun with my friends. I’ve been snowboarding for 7 years. My max speed was 78.6 km/h. This year I was trying to do some exercises in snowpark. I was snowboarding in Russia only: in Sochi, Kirovsk and Dombay, but I would like to try snowboarding in Alps. My last snowboarding trip was over 2 days ago. And now I am dreaming about next year and next amazing trip.
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My favourite hobby is snowboarding. Snowboarding gives me mountains, amazing views, speed, the sensation of flying and a lot of fun with my friends. I’ve been snowboarding for 7 years. My max speed is 78.6 km/h. This year I was trying to do some exercises in a snowpark. I have been snowboarding in Russia only: in Sochi, Kirovsk and Dombay, but I would like to try snowboarding in the Alps. My last snowboarding trip was over 2 days ago. And now I am dreaming about next year and my next amazing trip.
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Hi, Natalia. I understood your text perfectly, it was quite easy to read. And what a nice hobby! I'm not an expert in English, but I think "the feeling of being flying" and "was about 2 days ago" sounds a bit better.
My favourite hobby is snowboarding. Snowboarding gives me mountains, amazing view, speed, the feeling of being flying and a lot of fun with my friends. I’ve been snowboarding for 7 years. My max speed was 78.6 km/h. This year I was trying to do some exercises in snowpark. I was snowboarding in Russia only: in Sochi, Kirovsk and Dombay, but I would like to try snowboarding in Alps. My last snowboarding trip was about 2 days ago. And now I am dreaming about next year and next amazing trip.
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Natalia
المهارات اللغوية
الإنجليزية, الروسية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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