Last Thursday, I had ramen after having a drink with my ex-coworkers. I’m crazy about
ramen, especially Tonkotsu ramen. It was the first time I have visited that ramen
restaurant. Fortunately, I chose the right one, because sometimes restaurants have not lived up to my expectations. I know it’s high in calories, but I already miss it.
Hi Mariko. Quite good. It isn't horribly wrong, but I made the changes to make it sound more natural.
Keep practicing! Simón.