Composition: A Terrible Stomachache My mom was always forgetful about washing
her hands before eating. I would always remind her, but she never listened. (Unless she has changed, you can write this part in present tense - it’s what she always does) A
few days ago, Mom woke up feeling awful, she was shivering, pale, and had a
terrible stomachache. "My belly aches like heck!" she mumbled. I was like, "Did
you brush your teeth last night?" She went, "Yes, but I'm afraid I didn't wash
my hands before dinner." I suggested she see a doctor, but she didn't go anyway.
Dad sorted out some medicine for her and put her to sleep for the whole day. The
key was to drink a lot of water, just think of it like some sort of antidote.
The pain faded away quickly. By night, Mom had recovered as if nothing had
happened. From now on, I'll definitely keep an eye out and make sure we all wash
our hands before eating!