Tracy Elina
I was walking towards the park this morning. Sarah saw me and talked to me. "I have heard Luke had a terrible car accident yesterday." said Sarah. Luke is our neighbor. "Did he? I haven't seen him for one week! I thought he went to somewhere to traveled. Is this news reliable?" I asked doubtfully. "Well, uh...maybe." Sarah was going to continue. Suddenly, we both saw Luke walking towards us. Sarah asked about the accident that happened in front his house yesterday. Luke laughed and explained, "Yes, there was an accident yesterday, but I'm the one to help the wounded, he was alone, so I got into the ambulance with him. I just come back now!"
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I was walking towards the park this morning. Sarah saw me and talked to me. "I heard Luke had a terrible car accident yesterday." said Sarah. Luke is our neighbor. "Did he? I haven't seen him for a week! I thought he went somewhere. OR he was away travelling. "Is this news reliable?" I asked doubtfully. "Is this true" would be better. "Well, uh...maybe." Sarah was going to continue. Suddenly, we both saw Luke walking towards us. Sarah asked about the accident that happened in front his house yesterday. Luke laughed and explained, "Yes, there was an accident yesterday, but I'm the one who helped the wounded person. He was alone, so I got into the ambulance with him. I just came back now!"
Not bad. Some of it was grammatically correct but not natural.
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I was walking towards the park this morning. Sarah saw me and talked to me / Sarah saw me and struck up a conversation. "I have heard Luke had a terrible car accident yesterday." said Sarah. Luke is our neighbor. "Did he? I haven't seen him for a week! I thought he went on a trip. Are you sure about that?" I doubtfully asked. "Well, uh...maybe." Sarah was about to say something else when we both saw Luke walking towards us. Sarah asked about the accident that happened in front his house yesterday. Luke laughed and explained: "Yes, there was an accident yesterday, but I'm the one to helped the wounded, he was alone, so I got into the ambulance with him. I’ve just come back!"
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