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Toona bud fried egg, I like this dish, I still remember the first time I ate it, that day I went to a grocery, and found a new veggie I had never seen, I was so curious about it that I decided to buy it, then I searched the way how to cook it online. I followed the recipe step by step, and made a dish successfully. It tasted great. Now, as long as I see it in the grocery, I will buy it to make a fried egg with toona bud.☺️
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Toona bud fried egg -- I like this dish. I still remember the first time I ate it. That day, I went to a grocery store and found a new veggie I had never seen. I was so curious about it that I decided to buy it, then I searched online for the way to cook it. I followed the recipe step by step, and made a dish successfully. It tasted great. Now, as long as I see it in the grocery store, I will buy it to make a fried egg with toona bud.☺️ another option: "I searched online for how to cook it." (either "the way to" or "how to" can work fine) It might be good to start your last sentence with "Now, whenever I see it in the grocery store..." (if toona bud is something that is only sometimes in the grocery store...for example, if it is only available during a certain season each year).
You did a great job writing this! Very few changes were needed. :-)
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