Nayane Medeiros
My last trip was to Sao Paulo, was to see my Best Friend, we walked on the famous paulista avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved, and about my friend e still miss her.
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My last trip was to Sao Paulo, I went to see my Best Friend. We walked down the famous paulista avenue and got saw the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved it, and I already miss my friend.
Good job, Nayane! I’ve never been to São Paulo, but I’m sure it’s lovely :)
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My last trip was to Sao Paulo, was to see my Best Friend, we walked on the famous paulista avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved, and about my friend e still miss her.
These are very small corrections. Very nice job, and I would love to see King Solomon's Temple it has to be quite something to see.
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My last trip was to Sao Paulo, was to see my Best Friend, we walked on the famous paulista avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of Solomon's temple. I really loved, and about my friend e still miss her.
My last trip was to São Paulo. It was to see my best friend. We walked on the famous Paulista Avenue. We took a walk and got to know the replica of King Solomon's temple. I really loved it, and about my friend, I still miss her.
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