It was terrible weather today. Big typhoon came to Japan but I still had a classe so I went to a college in the storm🌬
My shoes and socks got wet and even my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.
It was terrible weather today. Big typhoon came to Japan but I still had a
classe so I went to a college in the storm🌬 My shoes and socks got wet and even
my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.
This is really good. Here's how I would write that:
We had terrible weather today. A big typhoon came to Japan but I still had class so I went to my college. My shoes, socks, and even my jeans got wet. The temperature was low and I felt so cold.
Some of my changes were for style and not strictly necessary. Overall, very well written. Sorry to hear about the rainy day!
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The weather was terrible today. A big typhoon came to Japan but I still had
classes so I went to a college in the storm🌬 My shoes and socks got wet and even
my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.