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Olga
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essay?
My dream dream.
Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not exception. My dream room isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa.
Next to the sofa there is a a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
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Hi, everybody. Could somebody please help check my little essay, called My dream room?
Everyone dreams of having their own ideal room, and I'm no exception. My dream room
is spacious and very comfortable. It has got white walls and two windows.
Along one of the walls, there is a LED light. On the opposite wall, there is a big, black TV, which I watch on my lavender sofa. Next to the sofa, there is my computer table,
with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table, I have my black laptop. On the other side the sofa, there is a small fridge with drinks inside, as well as ice cream in the freezer. Also,
in the left corner, I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room
is never a mess because I have robot, which tidies it up when I sleep. I really
like my room.
٢٨ يناير ٢٠٢٣
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essay?
My dream dream.
Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not exception. My dream room isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa.
Next to the sofa there is a a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
I think that it is fine to say "his or her" room since room is singular and we don't have a singular posessive pronoun for both make and female. Instead we tend to use "their" but unfortunately it is pleural and I don't think that it's correct.
٢٨ يناير ٢٠٢٣
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essays? My dream dream.
Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and I'mnot exception. My dream room
isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white wall.
Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on
the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a computer table
with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the
right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also,
in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room
is never in a mess, because I have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I
like my room.
٢٨ يناير ٢٠٢٣
Hi, everybody. Can anybody help check my little essay? My dream.
Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not an exception. My dream room
isn't small, but it's very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls.
All along a wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on
the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a computer table
with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the
right is the sofa. There is a small fridge with ice cream and drinks in it. Also,
in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have a robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I
like my room.
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Olga
المهارات اللغوية
البيلاروسية, الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية, الروسية
لغة التعلّم
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية
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