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Present-day, many people think depend is not good. However, anyone is depending on something. If the thinking is too much emphasis(depending is so not good)some people lose support. One Japanese doctor have a hindrance and he said “Anyone needs to support 4 ways. If humans have many choices, they don't need to rely on just one thing. It is healthy depending and leads to independence. Having many dependents protect people from unhealthy dependents and the self-responsibility theory.”
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In the present day, many people think dependence is not good. However, anyone depends on something. Some people lose support if the thinking has too much emphasis on dependence. Depending is so not good. One Japanese doctor's obstacle was that they said everyone must assist in four ways. If humans have many choices, they don't need to rely on just one thing. Depending on someone is healthy and leads to independence. Having many dependents protects people from unhealthy dependents and the self-responsibility theory.”
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Nowadays, many people think that being depend is not good. However, everyone is depending on something. If people start to think too much about how being dependent is bad, they may lose support. One Japanese doctor Thought about it and made three suggestions (I only see three suggestions below). If people can choose on what to rely on, they shouldn't rely on one thing only. Remaining healthy leads to more independence. Having many dependencies protect people from other unhealthy dependencies and allows them to be more responsible.
Let me know if I change the meaning of your essay or not.
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Present-day, many people think depend is not good. However, anyone is depending on something. If the thinking is too much emphasis(depending is so not good)some people lose support. One Japanese doctor have a hindrance and he said “Anyone needs to support 4 ways. If humans have many choices, they don't need to rely on just one thing. It is healthy depending and leads to independence. Having many dependents protect people from unhealthy dependents and the self-responsibility theory.”
The four choices mean is four dependencies.
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