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Today, I went to high school to practice the flute for an annual concert. I joined ensemble after a long time so I was really excited. I’ll make efforts to give a wonderful performance in our concert. I had a blessed time. Playing the instrument is very fun.
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Today, I went to high school to practice the flute for an annual concert. I joined the ensemble after a long time so I was really excited. I’ll make effort to give a wonderful performance at our concert. I had a blessed time. Playing the instrument is very fun.
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Today, I went to high school to practice the flute for an annual concert. I rejoined the ensemble after a long time so I was really excited. I’ll make an effort to give a wonderful performance at our concert. I had a blessed time. Playing the the flute is very fun.
This sounds like you were away for some time, so you have to "rejoin the ensemble". In English instead of efforts we give only 1 effort. I know that this may sound weird. You can also say many efforts and be grammatically correct, but it sounds unnatural. The concert is an event, and while you are "in" it, your performance is "at" it. At the end you need to determine how precise you want to be, either "an instrument" or "the flute". Both of these options are correct, "the instrument" is only talking about 1 very specific instrument, like これ or それ in Japanese.
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