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Sara
It is really hard to say good or bad to turn a hobby into a career. Ideas vary and I do not know about you, but I do want to make a point of knowing what your priority is.
I believe most of the people have hobbies, such as singing, painting and playing an instrument, but only a small proportion of them turn a hobby into a career. For all we know, someone who is crazy about singing may not be cut out for singing. Therefore, I do not think it is wise to turn this hobby into a career, because the prospect may be grim.
However, it is entirely feasible for people who have great artistic talent in a certain hobby to turn the hobby into a career. They are competitive and times more likely to succeed in this field than others.
No matter what we choose, we should acquire happiness and achievement from what we are doing.
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It is really hard to say whether it’s good or bad to turn a hobby into a career. Ideas vary,
and I do not know about you, but I would want to know what your priorities are. I believe most people have hobbies, such as singing,
painting and playing an instrument, but only a small proportion of them (can) turn a
hobby into a career. For all we know, someone who is crazy about singing may not
be cut out for singing. Therefore, in that case I do not think it is wise to turn this hobby
into a career, because the prospect may be grim. However, it is entirely
feasible for people who have great artistic talent in a certain hobby to turn
the hobby into a career. They are competitive and more likely to succeed
in this field than others. No matter what we choose, we should acquire happiness
and achievement from what we are doing.
Nice job! Great use of “cut out for” and nice conclusion :)
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Sara
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (أخرى), الإنجليزية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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