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Julia Reid
Help With Chinese(mandarin) grammar???? quickly please?? I would much appreciate it.

I have to write 12 sentences of dialogue for my class, here are the first 7:


你好!我姓洁, 我叫洁樱。今天早上我打电话, 但你不回复。昨天我们中午预订了座位。我预订了晚上十点一刻的座位。我们预订一共是六位。我们预订六楼包房。我们常常吃晚饭这里。


I also want to add this:

我们的包房看一下和清洁包房。

which I want to read: "Take a look at our private room and clean it.", but I am almost 100% sure the grammar is incorrect.

Any suggestions of sentences to add would also be much appreciated.


Thank you!



-Julia


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你好!我姓洁, 我名叫洁樱。今天早上我打电话给你, 但你不没有回复。昨天我们中午预订了座位。我预订了晚上十点一刻的座位。我们预订一共是六位。我们预订六楼的包房。我们常常在这里吃晚饭这里。 every sentance is short. and we prefer to connect them.




我们想请服务员检查和清洁我们的包房
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@ Julia, so you are not here to have your sentences corrected ?
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谢谢!I need 4 more sentences, does anyone have ideas(you can submit in English or Chinese)? 

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你好!我姓洁, 我叫洁樱。今天早上我打电话, 但你不没回复。昨天中午我预订了晚上十点一刻的座位。我们一共是六位。我们预订六楼包房。我们常常在这里吃晚饭。


我们想请服务员检查并清洁一下我们的包房(WHO will take a look at our private room and clean it ? the waiter or waitress ?)

لا تفوّت فرصة تعلّم لغة جديدة وأنت مرتاح في منزلك. تصفّح مجموعتنا المختارة من مدرّسي اللغات ذوي الخبرة وسجّل في درسك الأول الآن!

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