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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am basel abuhassa 25 years old from Palestine , born in ksa i finished my high school in ksa 2003 then i came to gaza i start studding in unevircity in 2006 then i graduated in 2010 . i work as photographer in media company i live in my father house i like action movies i start learning English 6 month ago now i wanna more practicing

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Hello Basel, your English is good for a new learner. You just missed some little things, such as the punctuation, past tense form, possessive pronoun, and some mistyped words. I'll try to correct them. Here we go..

I am basel abuhassa, 25 years old from Palestine. I was born in ksa. I finished my high school in ksa in 2003, then I came to gaza. I started studying in a university in 2006, then I graduated in 2010. I work as photographer in media company. I live in my father's house. I like action movies. I started learning English 6 month ago. now I wanna have more practicing practice.

 

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Hello there! You just need some improvements in capitalization, spelling of words and tenses. Do you want to learn English? How to be fluent especially in conversation and writing? I can offer help at an affordable rate. Hope to hear from you soon.

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