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Overeating. ( someone please correct my note) I really need to stop Overeating . This is too much.. It would have been okay if i eat healthy food .. But no! I eat junk food all the time... Instead of eating vegetable or fat free food i went to hotel today’s morning for eating some junk food.. Even though I know it’s not good for health but still I can't stop myself eating junk food.Whenever i feel depressed i eat.. My mind have this idea that eating junk food help me get rid of depression... I just feel happy when i eat . I am getting fat day by day and I am completely aware of that. I just Don't know the process of controlling overeating.. I am looking for some suggestions...

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Overeating. ( someone please correct my note)

I really need to stop overeating . This is too much.. It would be okay if I ate healthy food .. But no! I eat junk food all the time... Instead of eating vegetables or fat-free food, I went to a hotel this morning to eat some junk food.. Even though I know it’s not good for my health, but still I can't stop myself from eating junk food.Whenever i feel depressed, I eat.. My mind has this idea that eating junk food helps me (will help me) get rid of depression... I just feel happy when I eat . I am getting fatter day by day and I am completely aware of that. I just don't know the process to control overeating.. I am looking for some suggestions...

You can't use the phrase "even though" and the word "but" in the same sentence.
Even though I don't like her, I try to be nice to her.
I don't like her, but I try to be nice to her anyway.
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Rahat, I have sent you a personal message with some suggestions. Good luck.
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Hi Rahat! Just buy salad, onions, tomatos, cucumbers and mix them up a little bit. Plus you can add some smoked fish to the plate. It is very yummy food, believe me , man. Good luck!

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