Could you please correct this write up? thank you
COVER LETTER
Dear HR Dept of Manpower Company,
It is great for me to write this cover letter when I just move to HCMC and find out this job position available. I am really honored if I will be chosen to work at the position “General HR” because I would like to work in an international environment where I have a chance to improve my English and experience professional working area.
I believe that the position‘s requirement is suitable for me since I had experiences to work in international environment before. I used to work with French and Korean directors in foreign companies as a secretary. Working for international school including foreign principals and teachers as a team leader gave me experiences of serious and professional working manner.
With 8 years of working, I have possessed many skills as communication skill, proficient in English and mother language, interpreting, translating, public speaking, planning and organizing event, team work. I am very careful and get attention to details so it is easy for me to work at any position requiring details.
My verbal communication skills and positive attitude makes me an effective communicator with many departments in the company. Given the opportunity, I would be able to become an excellent representative of your company.
Also, NSRP is the best company here that I wish I have a chance to apply for job and my residence place is not quite far from the company so It is more convenient for me to stick to the company for my long life
Please consider the enclosed resume to know more about my professionalism, background and skills. I look forward to have a chance of discussing my application with you further and how I can significantly contribute to the ongoing of your great company.
Sincerely,
(Signed)
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Could you please correct this write up? thank you
COVER LETTER
Dear HR Dept of Manpower Company,
It is great for me to write this cover letter when I just move to HCMC and find out this job position available. I would be really honored if I were to be chosen to work at the position “General HR” because I would like to work in an international environment where I have a chance to improve my English and experience professional working area.
I believe that the position‘s requirement is suitable for me since I have had experiences working in an international environment before. I used to work with French and Korean directors in foreign companies as a secretary. Working for international school including foreign principals and teachers as a team leader gave me experiences of serious and professional working manner.
In my 8 years of work, I have developed communication skills, proficiency in English and mother language, interpreting, translating, public speaking, planning and organizing event and team work. I am very careful and pay attention to details so it is easy for me to work at any position requiring details.
My verbal communication skills and positive attitude makes me an effective communicator with many departments in the company. Given the opportunity, I would be able to become an excellent representative of your company.
Also, NSRP is the best company here that I wish I have a chance to apply for job and my residence place is not quite far from the company so It is more convenient for me to stick to the company for my long life
Please consider the enclosed resume to know more about my professionalism, background and skills. I look forward to having a chance to discuss my application with you further and how I can significantly contribute to the success of your great company.
Sincerely,
(Signed)
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