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My friend Joe Today I knew a new friend,he is American,Joe,19.I love to call him "little boy,little boy."Because he is 3 years younger than me,when a man younger than me,although just 1 year,I would feel I am an elder sister for him. Joe doesn't like his "nickname",so I call him "big man",I like to talk with American.I have 3 American friends,they are 12 years old,they are very cute and funny,the most important thing is they are very pure.They are nice and like to help people,they can tell you everything in heart.Joe,I think he is a nice guy too,he is a thoughtful and humorous person,I can talk about everything with him,maybe because he is younger than me,so I feel relax and like to have fun with him.I hope we can be good friends. Of course,some American are very rule and mean.There are good people and bad people in every country,but I hope I can meet kind people in this country.

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My friend Joe

Today I got a new friend,he is American,Joe,19.I love to call him "little boy,little boy."Because he is 3 years younger than m. When a man younger than me,although just 1 year,I  feel I am an elder sister for him.
Joe doesn't like his "nickname",so I call him "big man",I like to talk with Americans. I have 3 American friends,they are 12 years old, they are very cute and funny, The most important thing is they are very pure.They are nice and like to help people,They can tell you everything from the heart. Joe ,I think he is a nice guy too. He is a thoughtful and humorous person, I can talk about everything with him,maybe because he is younger than me,so I feel relaxed and like to have fun with him .I hope we can be good friends.
Of course,some Americans are very rude and mean.There are good people and bad people in every country, but I hope I can meet kind people in this country.

 

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I am happy to hear that you are enjoying being in this country, and you are right there are some bad people in this country, along with the good people. It is very important to be able to tell the intentions of certain people, and to avoid them.

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